Safe Places

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LadyThyrsa

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http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/220705/safe-places-abuse-angst-taemin-drabble

Safe Places is a one shot about Lee Taemin, an abused boy who has no place safe to go. He is hurt at home and school, and nothing has seemed to be going well since his mother left.

~ E V A L U A T I O N ~

Title (5/5)
Comments I liked the title, it was myserious and made me want to find out what it's about ^^

Description/Forward (7/15)
Comments It didn't really tell me much about the story but it did give me an idea.

Plot (17/25)
Comments It was really sad through the whole thing, though it was well written. If it had a happy ending, I'd have liked it better (:

Characters (14/20)
Comments Taemin's character was explained but none of the others were.

Flow (6/10)
Comments I was confused a lot and it was really sudden. The descriptions were rather good though and again, I really hoped it was a happy ending xD

Grammar (14/15)
Comments The grammar and spelling was pretty much perfect ^^

Overall Enjoyment (7/10)
Comments The story made my heart hurt :o it was well written but you should explain a lot more about the stories behind everyone. You should continue this story, change the ending, and I think it'd turn out good ^^

Final score: 70/100

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