My KPOP Idols Are Wizards
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My KPOP Idols Are Wizards
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jaeshii
My KPOP Idols Are Wizards is the story about a fangirl who wishes for one day to meet her idols, UKISS. One day when she loses her memory, they find her and care for her. But there's one other thing, they're wizards.
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Title (5/5)
Comments The title of this story definetly picked up my interest.
Comments The title of this story definetly picked up my interest.
Description/Forward (12/15)
Comments The foreward picked up my interest and so did the description but it did not tell much about the plot.
Plot (21/25)
Comments I didn't follow at first so well because I don't really know the members of UKISS xD but the conflicts were good and well explained. Also it was cute and funny :)
Characters (18/20)
Comments The characters are developing well and you explained a lot about their personalities which was great.
Flow (7/10)
Comments There were a lot of times where I was confused or the events happened too quickly. Other than that it flowed well :)
Grammar (9/15)
Comments Because the story is a 'you' story, it's hard to use good grammar. But I see a lot of past tenses when there should be a present tense or the other way around.
Overall enjoyment (8/10)
Comments I liked the story and I'm sure other UKISS fans will too ^^ it's very cute.
Comments The foreward picked up my interest and so did the description but it did not tell much about the plot.
Plot (21/25)
Comments I didn't follow at first so well because I don't really know the members of UKISS xD but the conflicts were good and well explained. Also it was cute and funny :)
Characters (18/20)
Comments The characters are developing well and you explained a lot about their personalities which was great.
Flow (7/10)
Comments There were a lot of times where I was confused or the events happened too quickly. Other than that it flowed well :)
Grammar (9/15)
Comments Because the story is a 'you' story, it's hard to use good grammar. But I see a lot of past tenses when there should be a present tense or the other way around.
Overall enjoyment (8/10)
Comments I liked the story and I'm sure other UKISS fans will too ^^ it's very cute.
Final Score: 80/100
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