Fool

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Why did I have to fall in love with a girl who was already in love? I'm such a fool.

 

 

A romantic one-shot featuring Lay.

 

 

 

 

Hey guys ^___^

I got this idea while sitting in my parents' car. The sky was SO blue and I was listening to 'fool' by Juniel feat. Yonghwa :)

This is going to be a one-shot devided into 2 chapters (maybe 3)

I didn't have any particular member in mind at first, but after thinking about it for a while I decided that Lay should be the male lead ;)

Um, it's Lay's POV and yeah, I don't want to give away too much ^__^

Please do not plagiarize.

 

btw this would be my 4th fanfic \(^o^)/

 

-dreamyflower <3

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

- Zhang Yixing

- 21 years old

- nice, humble, shy

 

- Lee Jieun

- 21 years old

- nice, smart

 

 

 

 

Author's Thoughts
dreamyflower
I've added a pic for the girl :3 now you guys know what I imagined her to look like
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ettoiscy #1
Chapter 1: Omg so cute. Can i just take yixing home?
I like it. So cute.
summerdiamond #2
Chapter 1: Wow! The ending was as though you were planning to write a second chapter but it was perfect! I just wish there could be a sequel though! Anyway, the story was really cute, I love your storyline however, you seem to have a habit of repeating words like, "chuckled". I'm sure there are many other words that can be used besides, "chuckled":) Nevertheless, the story was well written and I enjoyed every bit of it. Too bad it was a one shot though
bushra #3
Chapter 1: hey there
i just finished your "Fools" , i love it
so , want to ask you ... can i translate it to arabic ? with credit of course !
waiting for your reply
secretlurve #4
Chapter 1: This story is so sweet! I love it. :)
Silencedshadow #5
Chapter 1: Cute! So so so cute! I can actually relate a lot to Yixing and his pain. It's extremely painful when you like someone a lot and they like someone else and they confide in you with the details and even sometimes asking for help. So yeah...I completely understand. :) but I also know that if that person gets rejected by the one they like, you see it as an opportunity and feel a bit of relief, as egotistical as it sounds. I'm glad he gathered his courage to confess in the end, and even though we don't know her answer, I think he has high chances of being accepted. To tell you the truth, I like it more the way you ended it. The declaration itself is a beautiful way of ending it. :)
And the words of baby don't cry match really well with that scene when she was crying because of rejection. It made me realize again how beautiful the song is by it's reference to the little mermaid. I'll probably go listen to it once I finish commenting on this. :))
yellowlight_4 #6
Chapter 1: Lol. I know what you mean by an idea turning into something completely different when you write it. xD
This is the first time I'm reading something of yours, and although I wish you included her reaction, it was still very sweet~ I'm actually guilty of leaving my one-shots on a cliffhanger like that too...heh ^^;
baozi2175 #7
Chapter 1: Aww, that was very cute. :3
I'm glad I found it~
hopelesslover4268 #8
Chapter 1: I'm grinning too much............ but what did she say in the end???? Or did you let us(the readers) decide????
denicita #9
Chapter 1: Noo! But... but... What did she say? :(
I loved it anyway :)
Thank you ^^
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