Title: Mercy 자비

Author: Pandamwahi

Reviewer: --FortuneCookie

Title: (5/5)

It’s a very intriguing title, which makes me want to click on the story and read more about it. ‘Mercy’ isn’t a word that you would associate with comedy but more of in an angst or action genres. This has proven to me that you have put in some thoughts in choosing this specific word mindfully.

Another thing I really love is how your title can relate to the story plot as it progresses along. Having a title without any meaning (or link) to the story is basically a no-no but in yours -even though it doesn’t show directly- readers can get a gist of it throughout their reading. Not all writers can manage to do so, and you did. Good job!

Description and Foreword: (7/10)

Your description sounded more like a prologue, which you should add in the foreword section. The description is supposed to provide an introduction, or perhaps share about the conflict in your story. The first line would in fact suffice for a description since I always believe in quality over quantity. It can act as a mysterious hook, leaving the readers with some sort of questions.

Moving on to the foreword, it consisted of just credits and bascially nothing about the story plot. If you had included the prolouge (in your description) under the foreword section, it would have been much more appropriate and the structure would be defined. The prolouge was well-written, creating an air of mystery. The author notes are fine to stay, but I would advise you to move the pairings/characters/ratings into the description section.

Originality of Plot: (20/20)

I find that this is one of the most original fanfic I've come across, though I was somehow reminded of a movie (that was centered around survival). Each and every of the chapters left me in awe because of the unexpected outcomes. The story was thrilling to read. Even though I was hoping that the couples would somehow get back together, I thought that this ending was more appropriate than what I had in mind. 

Furthermore, I absolutely love the part in chapter twelve where Suho re-told how envious he wasof Exo-M; it showed me different personalities in contrast to the beginning where Suho was heartless and cruel. I was especially pleased with how there was that realisation in every character throughout the story. This was what made me love your story even more.

I find that the way you portrayed Jongin as the real killer was absolutely