Escaping Reality

Description

What would you do if you saw what he saw?  Would you mimic his footsteps?  Or would you run away?

Foreword

I wrote this for my writing class, the prompt being "the garden of time" and we had to write a short story over 300 words.
I thought it came out rather well.

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silversoul_snow
#1
Chapter 1: 'a coffin closed its lid above him.' you scared me! i thought he died!
SpidEMcD #2
Wow, just wow! I needed my inhaler as I read this. Thank you for inducing some asthma attacks (LOL- cough, cough)
Jun_KOI_Mi
#3
Wow, daebak!
iiNoona
#4
//flails
Like!