Problems to be solve

Description

This is my second story ,,,

 

please enjoy it and give some comments or suggestions on what you think about it ..

 

hope to see more ! 

 

Thanks !

Foreword

 

 

The musical notes seemed to dance in the air. There were clear symmetrical phrasings and transparent texture. Every note was distinct and bounced off a beautiful sound. More and more rapid notes were played with much force as the music became louder. There was a change of key as she climbed up a scale. The melody was unpredictable and there was several dissonances clashing against each other. Several deliberate distortions was heard and it could be felt as a stressed intense, subjective emotion. A two beat thrill ensued before the music ended. I opened my eyes and smiled. A roar of applause filled the auditorium. With the violin in my hands, I bowed and then, walked out of the stage gracefully.

 

 

 

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dramaddict
#1
OMG! Gui Gui is related to the Yan's blackmailer!?
Let me guess the one who save Gui is Wang Zi and the one who said "Playing dead, idiotic little girl?" with a cold voice is Aaron.
Update soon!
VictoriaCookie #2
Update update update soooon ! :D
-atelophobia
#3
Woah there love this story even though it kinda confused me a little haha, but i got it, so let me get this straight, someone is blackmailing the Yan family right? and that person might be GuiGui's dad or something? or her manager that took her money? and GuiGui's mom is coughing does that mean she is sick or soemthing ooh no, and I wonder who helped GuiGui, hope its Aaron ! [:<br />
Support GuiLun always and ForeveR<33<br />
GuiLun #1 die-hard fan!♥
Bubble
#4
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!<br />
I am super love this one ^_____^<br />
You gotta update soon for me yeah!!<br />
Garr!! dying to read your next chapter alrady =O
lovely_vampire
#5
WOW I love this so far. Clapclap for you sis. You improved a lot. I mean, you amazed me, sincerly, specially with the descriptions in this story. The descriptions of the scenes, the characters...are really good. And plus the story, is very unique. It's so interesting, I have so many questions right now, like: is Guigui's father the one who's blackmailing the Yan family? Does Guigui's mom, have some kind of disease? What will the Yan family do to Guigui? What will Aaron do and what is Wangzi's role here??? And who is the guy who helps Guigui, is it Aaron?? AHHHHHHHH, I have so mayn questions and I can't wait to know the answers. Also, what is Xiao Man's conection to Guigui and her mom? Is he a boy? ...<br />
And who is Mikan, is it the other name for Guigui? Haha, sorry for that. All I can say is good job sis. Thanks for writing this and choosing Guilun for the story. And WOW, my dear Guigui is so amazingly talented with her violin, I would want to see her like that. I bet Aaron has talent for music too. I can't wait to read more chapters, to find my answers. I hope you update soon. This is doing great sis. Thumbsup.
sweety_guilun #6
...ANOTHER GUILUN STORY!!! I'M SO HAPPPY!!!<br />
...Pls. update soon!!!<br />
...This story is very intriguing...hahah<br />
...I'm so worried. What will happen to our dearest GuiGui???<br />
...Lol... just update soon...<br />
GUILUN IS LOVE!!!