Heartless Immortals and Thieves

Description

Kris was one of those Heartless Immortals.  They weren't called Heartless because they were cold, violent or mean people.  They were called Heartless because they can continue on living without a heart inside their bodies.  There were cases when a Heartless Immortal would transfer their heart to another body.  This usually happens when a Heartless falls in love with a mere mortal. 

Foreword

This is an entry for Captured Moments.

Task Two  Theme:  Revenge.

 

Thank you to my lovely betareader Kironstree for editing~

 

Thanks to caram-eL from Gentle Serendipity Designs for the wonderful background and poster~

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000521
#1
I LOVE THIS
eunhae77
#2
Chapter 2: nooooo such a cliffhanger :( you did a great job with the story, it was very original (like all your stories) and i absolutly loved it (like i love your other stories xD) i would've loved a sequel but i'm guessing that's too much for me to ask so i guess i have to get over me never knowing who the owner of the heart was>.< lol
LavenderAlisa19
#3
Chapter 1: I love the idea of the story, really creative! The ending was sort of a cliffhanger that left me feeling restless, lol. Anyway, I always adore your ideas and the way you write them into stories (Y)
Va_asianloverz
#4
Chapter 1: it is a nice chapter
please write more
celestila68
#5
Chapter 1: This was really interesting, I like it~
54n81r1
#6
Chapter 1: this was really awesome!
summer24 #7
Chapter 1: It was awesome. The story just oh good. I love kris's character here.
caseysusie18
#8
this is really really awesome. just like your other stories. and the idea was really creative. the ending was unexpected. this is simply amazing. i would love to live on your mind one day, unnie. okay, does that sound creepy? forget it. hahahaha.

i wonder if heartless immortals and thieves were real... hmm...
neomanuisarang
#9
Chapter 1: Wow. This is new. It's certainly morbid, definetely bloody and violent, but it really hooked me up. I wonder, where did you get the idea for this story? :))
Generalchan
#10
Your Story ideas are always so Interesting *o*