WOW!
It's NOT a fail. Never. ;w; But I really do like this, the balance of Chen's attempt to be all y and seducing Xiumin, and than back to being adorable, is just pure love. <3
Well, I read this from phone and it's kinda confused at first while there's 1st POV on it then back to 3rd POV. You also mixed the name for Minseok then Xiumin. Overall it's good. ;)
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