Come Back to Me

Description

We did everything together, and then our line of work separated us. And, more than anything, I want him back in my arms. Luhan, I want you back in my arms.

Foreword

Hello, everyone, this is going to be my entry for EbbieChan's Writing Contest, Illusions of Perfection!

 

Ok, I just fixed the ending. Before, the ending was absolutely dreaful to read because it was so cliche. Therefore, I added around 1,000 words to make it more satisfactory. I like it a lot more, now!

 

 

Part of the Exo Cycle:

Krisyeol + Hunhan + Baektao + Chenlay

Author's Thoughts
remello
i'm trying really hard to write this before band camp but I woke up late :(
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mallows #1
Shoot. this was just awesome. written so well, so matching to its setting, so perfectly HunHan. I can't. omg. just when I thought it was gonna go to the cliche parts, it didn't. sabnckjascbas. I just love this okay. Sehun as a freaking Science Prodigy - perfect. the character was really well executed. skjcbnkas. I can't express myself properly. sweet and adorable! ♥♥♥
KuroiDaiyamondo #2
oh my gaaaawd this was sooo cute,
and I don't know why, but I'm crying,
it was expected that Lu Han would be there in his apartment, but still...aww I love this! great written!
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