Update soon!!! I hope she ends up with taemin!!!! I never read a story where the main character ends with him. Its sad.....
Anyways update soon!!

this is a great story i found using the random fanfic thing. >:3 YAY~

Plz update soon author! :)

That's ok. Even though I wasn't clear from reading Chapter One about whose POV it is, I found it funny after I realized who it is. It's important that you be familiar with your characters' personalities before writing about them. xD That can happen to everbody when their computers lag while they're uploading something. It's been a while since you last updated. Life must be keeping you busy. <br />
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Key is such a caring older brother to Soojin. LOL...Onew and his love for chicken. xD I think Key's just giving her a friendly warning beforehand so that she'll be aware of what she's going to have to put up with. Soojin reminds me of Tohru Honda from the anime/manga "Fruits Basket" since she loves doing household chores, and she seems modest except when it comes to gaming. xD That's when she's in total "warrior" mode. Jonghyun doesn't know what he's getting himself into by challenging her to a game on the X-Box. That's what he'll find out once they get started. Having a competitive streak when it comes to gaming, I think she could match up to Minho. She just may have met her match if she goes up against him. It seems like something he'll be really good at doing. Plus, he can be competitive.

Chapter 2 typos (Part 2):<br />
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7. “Then it’s settled,” Onew smiled,<br />
Correction: “Then it’s settled,” Onew said with a smile.<br />
"Smile" is not a verbal action.<br />
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8. He asked, whipping out a fancy little notebook and pen.<br />
* You forget to add the definite article "a" before "pen."<br />
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9. “No, no. Just the chicken.” Onew said positively.<br />
Correction: “No, no. Just the chicken,” Onew said positively.<br />
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10. “Take into account that if you take this job, you’ll live with me for a long time,” I smiled.<br />
Correction: I told her with a smile.<br />
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11. “N-no, you weren’t too quiet...” I mumbled, as I regained my posture and continued washing the dishes.<br />
Correction: “N-no. You weren’t too quiet...” I mumbled as I regained my posture and continued washing the dishes.<br />
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12. “I saw the way you were looking at that game in the window, and how you showed off your little PSP to your brother,” He smirked.<br />
Correction: “I saw the way you were looking at that game in the window and how you showed off your little PSP to your brother,” he stated and smirked.<br />
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13. “I never said I only played the PSP,” I turned to him, a glint of anger in my eye.<br />
Correction: I retorted, turning to him with a glint of anger in my eye.

Chapter 2 typos:<br />
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1. Then she went red faced, possibly at the thought of what else I could’ve heard.<br />
* It's written as "red-faced."<br />
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2. We stopped at the maîtres d deskand studied our surroundings.<br />
Correction: We stopped at the maîtres d's desk and studied our surroundings.<br />
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3. She continued to look at the foods on the menu.<br />
* "Food" is plural all on its own without an "s."<br />
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4. I pursed my lips and thought if there were any other available jobs for a fifteen year old girl in Seoul.<br />
* The adjective is written as "fifteen-year-old."<br />
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5. He may be good looking but he can be so up himself.<br />
Correction: He may be good-looking, but he can be so up himself.<br />
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6. “No, Soojin, you don’t have to listen to these filthy boys,” <br />
Correction: “No, Soojin. You don’t have to listen to these filthy boys,” <br />
* Double negatives ("no" and "don't") in one sentence gives it the opposite meaning. They cancel each other out and result in a positive.

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update soon~!!!!

nice story, can't wait to see what happens next. =)<br />
I like maid stories, and this reminds me of my favorite fanfic's<br />
Asian_Innocence's 'It's Not As Cool As It Seems". =0<br />
but anyway, this is shinee, and i'm interested =)

Ahhh yes sorry about all that, I'll do my best to make the story better as it progresses. And yeah I didn't notice until the next day or so xD