Girlfriend

Description

 

'I need you, now.'

 

Gikwang smiled at the sight of the text on his phone. After practicing, heading to their dorm, he decided to check his phone and was pleased by a text from his girlfriend—Jaemin.

 

Foreword

I don't even know why I wrote that, actually..That idea was stuck in my head.

It's quite awkward, and I still don't like my writing but..I don't know. Tell me if anything's wrong! As for grammar errors. 

Whoosh~ :)

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ti_avenus
#1
Chapter 1: Lol i thought this was a . HAHAHAHAHAH
pathless
#2
congratulations
Lilbobaball
#3
Chapter 1: Cuteeee ahhh
eeyore97
#4
Chapter 1: Naww~ its so sweetttt :D
AnnoNiji #5
Chapter 1: (hey j'ai vu que tu étais française alors let's speak in french XD)
J'aime vraiment comment Kiki a réagi face au message de sa petite amie >~< je comprends parfaitement son état d'incompréhension et de panique parce que la seule chose qu'il sait c'est que Jaemin va pas bien et c'est tout ce qu'il a en tête. Awh~~ C'est vraiment triste pour Jaemin mais la scène où Kiki la berce et la console est adorable et m'a donné un sentiment de "calme", de douceur~ ^_^
It's pretty weird to write in french on aff don't you think so? :PP btw thanks for this ff and fighting~~~~
Luna92
#6
Awh that was so sweet, I wish I had a boyfriend like him ^.^