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         Guys, this was an experimental story. Experimenting my writing skills, and how many people subsribe to fanfictions with horrendous grammar, and no plot exactly. Not that I'm meaning anything offensive, just saying! The grammar of this fanfic was unbelievably geh. You know? And there was no plot. AT ALL. I'm sorry. I'm not calling anyone idiots, I'm just saying that more authors deserve more than they get^^

 

GEEZ, I'M SO STUPID. Please check out my other project, 'Fate is Just a Four-Letter Word' while I take this in for 'repairs'. I'll find a definite plot, and be grammatically correct~! In the foreword, it just shows what the ending might become of. XD In my future fanfics... MAYBE... XD LOOOL, Just jokes. IDK... But.. YEAH. I need to take this in for edits.

 

 

 

PEACHY PRODUCTIONS ORIGINAL®: sujushinki207

(mochiimochiiii27)

 

 


Plagiarizing won't be tolerated. 'Despicable Me' minions will be hired to track you down. And you willl suffer the consequen- HAHA, I mean, please no copying, this is an original by EvilSHU.

 

 

Foreword

 

"I just realized something..." Hyukjae started. 

 

"I'm not gay. Not for you, not for anyone.This was all confusion..." He shrugged.

 

The skies darkened above us. His words.. Pierced through me. I felt helpless. Broken. Worthless. Sad

 

"W-What are you talking about?" I forced a laugh. 

 

He chuckled. Tears welled up in my eyes,

 

"I never loved you." He said bluntly. 

 

"B-But I did! You made me fall for you..." I hissed.

 

"I'm sorry for that... But it's true... I guess everything I was feeling was curiosity..." He touched the point on his mohawked hair. (A/N:y, Free, and Single Hair... How to describe that?) 

 

             I leaned on the lamp post. Staring at the flickering light. I shifted my gaze to the darkened sky. Memories of me and Hyukjae flash in my head. I swallow an imaginary lump and regained my posture. Drops of rain fell on to my forehead. 

 

"For 5 years... It was all confusion?" He nodded nonchalantly.

 

 

"I apologize to your mom who thought we had something. But after meeting them, I just... Kind of... Lost it. Not that it wasn't fading for the last 3 months." The rain fell harder.

 

"You said you'd never leave me..." I bit my lower lip. 

 

"It wasn't me. It was my blind side. I didn't understand myself then..." He stuck his hands in his pocket.

 

The tears trickled down my face. Slowly blending with the everlasting rain. My lower lip quivered, and my hands trembled.

 

"I just don't feel it anymore Donghae-ssi... Besides... It's a sin to love the same , right? So for me.. It was a sin to love you." He blinked. 

 

Donghae-ssi? What happened to Hae?

 

Silence.

 

He turned to walk away. 

 

"Hyu-Hyuk!" I call out, my voice cracking. 

 

His back faded into the dark. The sunshine of his hair was gone. His hair was dark. Everything was dark.

 

"Hyukkie!" I cry. 

 

"My Hyukkie... My monkey. My love..." I inhale sharply.

 

"Is it a sin to love you?"

 

       I fall to my knees. Clasping my hand over my mouth. Trying to suppress the sobs. But my volume increased. No one was around anyways. No one was here for me anymore. They were all... Gone... Love stories, as we all know, there is never a happy ending.

 

~END~

 

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(A/N-1: Disappointed...? But hey, not all stories have a have happy endings, right...? And I guess this is one of those stories. Thank you for supporting!)

 

(A/N-2: You should leave some comments if you liked this ending or not... Meh... I want to hear your opinions! [:)

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zipfluf
#1
Chapter 1: The ending is so...so...so. sad!! where is the story though?
k_loverunited
#2
Chapter 1: WHY YOU DELETE IT????? I HAVENT FINISH READ YET TTTTTTT.TTTTTTTT
HYUKslave #3
Chapter 1: i just got the notice, when .... errr, i don't get this chap 1 thing.

OTL .. when i sub i didn't notice the story there ... now that i read i'm confused ... have deleted the story or....?
fangirlkpopstars123
#4
dont delete it noooooooooooooo........... you would ruin my life man please dont no no no please man
caitykoala #5
I love this. And you can't delete it Hyuk finally got Hae! I love this story please don't get rid of it :'( I'll comment more if it makes you happy :) I was really surprised about Kyumin, didn't see it coming at all. Kyu and Alice was cute, but i like Kyumin more :P
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #6
Kyaaaaa!!! Cute Chapter!!! ^^

But... Wait!! Kyuhyun and Alice are couple right?? and why is KyuMin formed?? I thought Kyuhyun and Alice are together.. I'm a bit confused there... Hmmm... *confused*

Yes!!! Yes!!! EunHae are official now!!! Wohoo!!! EunHae Figthing!! x3 x3

And Author-nim.. to your reply to me.. Why is Alice leaving?? what's Alice reason to leave?? Why?? how about Hae??

To Alice:
Alice.. author-nim said your leaving!! Why?? Where?? When?? please tell me Alice.. How about your brother Hae?? WHY?!!!! T_T
zipfluf
#7
Wait....did u change this? I swear I remember He and Hyukkie kissing under a tree and Alice running/limping away....
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #8
Donghae... You worry about Alice and Kyuhyun.. Dont worry Hae.. Kyuhyun really LOVE your sister... He will not broke Alice heart.. :D and Alice loves Kyuhyun.. just accept them.. ^^

OHMY!!! Donghae and Eunhyuk!!! Are they together now?!! And Donghae confess to Eunhyuk that he likes him.. Are they couple now?!! *happy* *happy*


Author-nim... Did you EDIT this?? ;) ((just asking)) oh and I love the video up there.. EunHae is really REAL!!! *squeling*
JewelHyuk_FishyHae #9
Aww.. this chapter is so cute!!!
Eunhyuk and Donghae are so cute!! Jealous Hae.. ;)

I really like this story of yours..
Please don't delete this.. i'm begging you.. ^.^ ^.^
This is really good.. Update Soon.. ;)