Forgive me, for I have sinned

Description

“To fall into a sin is easy. To fall out is impossible.”

Foreword

I've been dying to write something like this for so long. I don't even care if it LOL

There are a few flashbacks, maybe you find it confusing, but I'm happy with this.

 

This is a Yunho x Devil!Jae one-shot, but nothing ual LOL

I'm not actually mentioning Jae in this, but he is the Devil.

 

Inspired by the movie "Devil"

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reirei13 #1
oh damn. o _ o
a95959 #2
woah u need to write more like this !
awesome !<3
seunglii #3
kyaaaaa i really love it!!
its feaking awesome XD
Purplezest #4
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh defo different from your normal stuff but i loved it :D ......clearly some jaeho is gonna be going down ohhhh fire and jaeho what a combo XD
whatwhatwhat #5
wow this was awesome ..... but 4 some unknown reason it made me LOL a bit , I really donno why , I mean this one-shot has a kind of deep meaning between it's lines but here I am giggling like a wacko *sigh* , and wow poor yunho , I've read 3 fics today , in the first one he was an assasin , the second one he was a drug dealer and in the thired on he was an , and now he went to hell??!!! XD (not a good Yunho-day I guess) , maybe this is why I'm laughing now ......
jaeshipper #6
what do envy had to do with yunho's sin?? arghhh!! i'm confuse!! blame my limited vocabulary..*sigh
itslol123 #7
Wow it was excellent but what I don't get is how he went to hell. He admit what he did and repented that was the key he was willing to turn himself in having a conscience that should have I don't kno... anyway greatly written I guess even if is with Jae I don't want Yunho to suffer eternety lol
joongie_love #8
wow~

this was a bit confusing but i got it at the end
wow~

♥
SadisticRainbows #9
Not confusing at all, in fact I really liked it. <3
munchyxB #10
That was weird but lol it was fun to read!!
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