A Wish Upon a Paper Star
Description
Fold a star. Make a wish. Drop the star in the jar.
That's how Taemin and Minji had done it.
The little ritual had once brought them together.
Will it do so again?
Foreword
The ticking of a clock could be heard throughout one lonely apartment as it counted seconds, minutes, years.
She stayed unmoving, sitting at the dining table and staring at the small jar that was on the shelf above her kitchen sink. Although the jar was sprinkled with a layer of dust, the small, multi-colored paper stars that filled it were still vibrant, in colors of blue, red, green, orange, and purple.
A story of memories and wishes.
Yes, it's a TaeminxMinzy fic. I'm quite disappointed, because I feel like I didn't do the picture, story, or coupling justice. Also, if you readers get confused, tell me! I'll try and fix the fic.
Quite long, about 1,700 words.
I hope you readers enjoy! <3
This is a contest entry for the Cαρтυяεd Mσмεηтs εїз competition. Inspired by the pic above.
This oneshot has been reviewed by the cool story, bro request shop here. Got a 60%, but I'll work to make it better! Will be making edits here and there, maybe post the finished result later.
Also reviewed by the Starry Ice Cream Review Shop here. Got a 54%, but I'm still working on improving!
Points that will be improved: visual aspects (posters and background), that damn title (I CAN NEVER GET THOSE RIGHT *sobs*), double-checking and triple-checking and quadruple-checking for grammatical errors, and character personality/development.
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