Broken Wings

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This is a sqequel for my fic Halo~ If you haven't read that one, I suggest you do that first because a lot of things will make more sense. However, you dont HAVE to, I'm just saying...you should. This should be about 4-5 chapters. Anyway, as promised, it's the 19th so I'll be posting the first chapter shortly. 

Foreword

Stories of angels have been around since the early existence of men. But the angels themselves are as old as time. They are scattered
throughout the universe, as messengers, healers, watchers and protectors. Doers of justice and righteousness. And for every star in the sky, there is an angel for which that star belongs to.

   If the star dies, so does the angel . . . and vice versa.

   Humans know nothing of the life of angels, though they paint pictures of what they imagine us to be. The realism of the fact is that even though angels are immortal and ‘pure’ souls, we are flawed. And so there is a strict set of angelic laws that cannot be broken, punishment for breaking these laws is banishment, or even death.

   I am guilty of that. My crime, falling in love with a human named Taecyeon. But in an act to save me, my brother, head watcher of our region in the higher realm and keeper of the temple of Uriel, has ordered the gates of heaven to be closed from my passing, trapping me here for the next hundred years.

   One and a half of those years have passed, but it has felt like twenty.

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Thanks for all the comments guys!

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 7: So a good continuation from the first one. It answers some questions I previously had and further expands on the relationships and tensions between several of the people. The story itself was pleasant and I ultimately do like the end conclusion from Chansung's suggestion. That was a nice touch, if a bit rushed, but by that point, there really wasn't much of an option left. The relationship between Junho and Taec continues to be painfully sweet and emotional, and it would be interesting to how (if) things pan out in part 3.

There were a couple parts that made me pause though, in particular because of just how much the main pair cared for each other. I understand Junho's gambit - he knew exactly what he was getting into, more or less, but Taec's admittance of 'Tell me or Junho dies' was more than a little shocking. I thought this man wanted to move heaven and earth to save him and then he says that... And the reunion scene felt a bit... strange given the situation, but I guess it's also plausible. Though you certainly made me feel even worse for Junsu and Wooyoung in that situation (granted, I just keep feeling bad for the latter).

Beyond that, it was a pretty good read and definitely full of emotion. As mentioned, I would be curious to see how things play out in the last bit with the most recent development, including Nickhun's rather sudden attempted transgression and punishment. I don't know if it's still in the works, but good job for finishing this one and good luck with the next one, whatever it might be. ^_^
FreakinCat #2
Chapter 7: No part 3 ??? TnT I'm gonna cry you combined two of my favorite things angels and 2PM and I really wanted to see angel Taec so please update please I beg you
sehijaudaun #3
Chapter 7: Is there a part 3 for this?
MikeyHeartsWG
#4
Chapter 7: this makes me happy

^^
lixjiejie #5
Chapter 7: I can feel the love between Taec and Junho... awesome writing.. thank you wonderful writer. Looking fwd to part 3.
snsdeelicious #6
Chapter 7: wahhh ! ! ! authornim youre such a great writer ! ! !
DarkFoxesNightmare
#7
I have been reading all kinds of stories but finally got around to actually having a profile and subscribing to the stories I love reading.
thekiller2806
#8
Chapter 7: Beautiful!! I love it. Want more :)