first of all, sorry for being mia for so long! exams.
I found the charas' thoughts and reactions realistic, and I liked that the scenes were often seen through their eyes.
I think Jinkyo featured more in this chapter and she was just how I imagined her. c: in the way she felt about her problems in the practice room. the other members’ problems, like having a few seconds’ worth of lines and their outfits, and the ending of their first performance were like having a look inside of a real group’s debut too.
suhyun’s behaviour is mysterious but it looks like something really is brewing under the surface… which is suspenseful indeed…
miyoung and mikyoung are like twins in the way that their names are so similar XD miyoung’s the one I still can’t tell much about. I wonder what the managers are like too c:
I noticed jinkyo’s habits that were incorporated in ^o and loved her and ren’s almost-meeting/first encounter.
their performance ending was kind of funny with that fangirl’s callout. it's sad that they were upset by it even though they performed well. I wonder when things will start to get better for them. up till now though, I like the way everything has been written a lot.
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Aww, Lovely.. ): Reminds me of Stellar's debut stage where the audience was completely silent... Hopefully the girls will end up loving Lovely and give them their support!
Guuurl, I have this huge feeling that Suhyun is going to do something really, really bad later in the story... Unless she wholeheartedly likes Jinkyo.. Then...
Ehe, can't wait for the next update! ^^

Awww! Poor Lovely! Can't believe they didn't get a lot of claps from the fans! D: and I see what happened between Ren and Jinkyo ;) hoho! Nonetheless, Lovely, 아자 아자 화이팅! 힘내!

I feel bad for the girls. A bad audience reacion will ruin your tage performance. But I loved the beginning when Nicolette stopped to check her hair and make-up. Although I must admit I was expecting a bigger reaction frm Suhyun.

-Grammar Nazi COrner-
"You're to shy..." and "you act to weak..."
Because you're using it to mean more than what it should be you should use 'too'.
"You're too shy...." and "You're too weak..."

"Their choreographer, Greg Hwang..."
There shoud have been a second coma after Hwang.
Their choreographer, Greg Hwang,..."

I knew I wouldn't get chosen lol. I'm just gonna stop applying for these things cause I never get chosen XD. Anyway congrats to the members and I'm excited to see how the story goes.

Whoa! Can't believe my Mikyoung got chosen! Thanks for choosing her! And congratulations to the rest of the chosen girls! :-) definitely can't wait to see the girls' progresses and how you portray them!

thank you for choosing Jinkyo! ^o^
ooh, their managers made a return...
looks great so far - their album is gorgeous, and I'm looking forward to seeing the girls interact and everything. cccc; xx

Wow, thank you for choosing my character! ^^
Congrats to the others as well~
I can't wait for the story to officially start~ Good luck! <3

Thank you so much for choosing Eun Hee!

Also congratulations to the other chosen ones!