"I'm Not A Criminal! He Was Asking For What He Got!"

Description

Everyone wants some bit of everyone, and every bit of someone. It was, is and always will be only natural. So, Key finds nothing wrong in feeling that his situation calls for cold-blooded murder, because he could never have every part of the “someone” that he wants, needs, craves if someone else holds him close.

We tell ourselves; “no, this is enough. What I have already is enough. I shouldn’t be like this. I should be happy with what I have…” but it’s a lie. No matter how much we have, it’s never enough. It’s never enough, so why lie to others, to yourself? It’s never enough, so to get what you want, you reach for it.

The same way Key reaches for the newly purchased gun, and tries not to feel horrible as the light red pillowcase beneath the soft brown hair turns crimson…

It’s the first time he’s killed.

But it’s not the last.

Sakko ujucha sujucha suvachochassa mudu anatimani SANTHUSSAKOcha SUBHAROcha appakichchocha sallahuka vutthi santhindriyocha nipakocha appagabbo kulesu ananugiddo nacha kuddang samachare kinchi yena vinnyu pare upavadeyyung… 

Foreword

Mianhe guys, I just can't do a topic without going through the story first, and this is a story that I am SO not doing after I write it down somewhere else so... yeah. I'll give it a title... or maybe you guys could do it! :D Read this through and tell me if you think of a good one. :)

The thing I gave it Italics (above) is the Karaneeya Metta Sutta. (The Discourse of Loving-Kindness) It's a Buddhist thing, I thought it would go well with this. :) I'm gonna make it like that thing that the guy from Secret Garden always says to himself (Kim Soohan moo... xD) I gave the meanings (SANTHUSSAKO means Being happy with what you have, and SUBHARO means easily satisfied. Oooh, Key, what have you done?)

Sakko: should be able
Ujuca: honest
Sujuca: upright
Suvachochassa: gentle in speech
Mudu: meek
Anatimani: not proud
 Santhussakocha: contented
Subharocha: he ought to be easy to support
Appakichchocha: not over-busy
Sallahuka Vutthi: simple in living
Santhindriyocha: tranquil his senses
Nipakocha: let him be prudent
Appagabbo: not brazen
Kulesu Ananugiddo: not fawning on families
Nacha kuddang samachare kinchi yena vinnyu pare upavadeyyung: also, he must refrain from any action that gives the wise men any reason to reprove him.  

So, any guesses on who died? ;)

 ANDANDANDANDAND Someone. Please. Help me with the artwork. I'm still so new, I have no idea what to do, and my creativity can be measured on a teaspoon. Pwease?? *does Taeminnie's and Tao's BBUINGBBUING~ thing*

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BOO! Scared you? No? Nevermind, then. :P Anyway, just another little reminder to COMMENT! And let me know if you guys want me to continue my HunHan fic. :D

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ilabya15 #1
interesting~
trueB2UTYwithin
#2
Gah, I love my wife ;-;

And you dedicated a chapter to me?! :D How sweet ^^ If you want, I'll dedicate a oneshot to you~ Just give me the pairing and I'll write one up!

I love your technical terms here, the one that really caught my eye was "fire poking thing"...keke x) Love you~

Your writing is really good, how exactly are you 1 1/2 years younger than me?! I don't think I was this good when I was your age...(now I sound like I'm in' 30 or something...great)

Anyway, keep posting! They're great ^^ You're great, more specifically xD
trueB2UTYwithin
#3
I love it. I love YOU. I don't understand how you can like my stories when this is infinitely better writing than anything I've ever produced in my LIFE. T-T

Gonna go cry myself to sleep at your perfect amazingness now...

(Damn, why can't I write long, awesome comments like yours on my stories? I . Well, I PM'd you too, at least, so that's gotta count for something, right?)
kpop-drabbles
#4
jhaghsgk it's so BEAUTIFUL <3 you have such a nice way with words ^^
siahna
#5
this sounds really interesting :D I'm excited for the first chapter! <3
XxBlowingxBubblesxX
#6
So excited!!!! If TaeMin is the one who dies I will be very sad...I hope it's ONTAE!!!!
jongtaeluvr
#7
omg... this sounds cool! but i hope jongtae dont get hurt.... hehe you should keep thek together! jonghyun could protect his taeminnie <3<3<3<3 and either minkey or onkey should be the main, cause jongtae should stay together xD annnnnd just wondering is there going to be any in this story~ hehe any jongtae smex -winkwink- cant wait till u update xD