Being a Hottie's Singing Partner - Seulgi
Sparkling Jewels {Closed}Story Title: Being a Hottie's Singing Partner
Author: Seulgi
Story Link: Being a Hottie's Singing Partner
Title (3/5):
First of all, I didn't like the usage of 'Hottie' in the title. That term is only used in conversation or informal stuff, not in a title. Next was the fact that your 'a' wasn't capitalized. It is universally known that almost every word in the title has to be capitalized. There are exceptions, of course. But yours wasn't.
Appearance (5/5):
Your poster and background were beautiful ^^ Love it so much :)
Foreword / Description (7/10):
The description was messy and why are they so less spaces between the sentences? It made the whole description looked like one lump of words when in reality, it wasn't. Take a few steps away from your PC and tell me if you see one single paragraph or a few paragraphs. Did you copy and paste your description or what?
Foreword was okay, I guess but I was kind of confused by Jihye's character points. She's bubbly yet sarcastic? A bit weird...
Plot / Originality (21/25):
Overall, it was kind of cliched. The whole typical idol in love with normal girl... I'm sorry but I'm not a fan of that...
On the brighter side, you did managed to add some different stuff in it and I'm glad for that. For example, Jihye didn't win the contest. I'm really happy that you didn't make her win the contest because most authors would make their
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