Vulnerable - edlyns
Sparkling Jewels {Closed}Story Title: Vulnerable
Author: edlyns
Story Link: Vulnerable
Title (2/5):
Wouldn't catch my attention if I were to see it...
Appearance (3/5):
I love both your poster and background! But the problem is that your background really doesn't match your poster and it is too bright which is hurting to my eyes.I would suggest you to change the font or color too to make it more attractive for the foreword and description.
Foreword / Description (6/10):
I like the description and the foreword but I found it quite strange for you to put the character's profile in the description. You should provide pictures for the characters too to let readers know how they look like, especially for the OC.
Plot / Originality (20/25):
I have read a few fics about a girl who doesn't open her heart to guys until 'he' arrives, but
Grammar / Spelling (30/30):
I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes! Good job :3
Flow (9/10):
Your flow is going a little fast but it's okay! O u O;
Enjoyment (13/15):
I enjoyed reading your story! Hwaiting!
Total (83/100):
A2
Grade:
A2
Date / Time Taken:
Dunno / Dunno
Reviewed by: turnbaek
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