Chapter 5: just continue writing this story author nim!!!you're really a great author!!!i really like your story!!please don't give up on this story!!many of your subscriber will support you!!!and please update soon!
hmm..
how to say it?
it's good, the idea is nice..
but somehow I cant feel emotion in this fic.
you write it.. how is it,
I just feel empty..
maybe you should add a little more monologue?
and about the chapter, dont you think it's a bit short?
hehehe for too much complaining mianhamnida ^^v
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