One Thousand Paper Cranes

Description

There are only two powers in the world, the sword and the mind .... In the long run the sword is always vanquished by the mind. ~ Napoleon  

Being a soldier is not easy and Jonghyun knows that now. Everyday he has to face more despair than in his worst nightmares. He starts making paper cranes to stay sane. He finds Onew to help him through everything who is both his friend and his enemy.

Onew is more real than one thousand paper cranes but not as real as the gun in Jonghyun's hand.

Foreword

 

They told him he would fight in the first line, defeat the enemy, taste the glory. He would come back a hero, covered in medals, carrying the flag he loved so much. He was thrilled at first. He signed up without giving it a second thought. They shaved his head and gave him clothes that were too big for him. He didn’t care. He was too dazzled by all the romanticism they had decorated war with. For him the Enemy was just an abstract idea. Targets he had to hit like in his video games.

When he was sent to the battlefield the only things waiting for him were despair, fear and death. He soon realized there was nothing noble or heroic about war. He soon realized he was trapped in a never-ending nightmare.

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lunermist #1
OMG!! I love it!!
Yukie23
#2
So much emotion, very well executed.
Simply put, this is a jewel. I'm glad I found a serious war fic on here, and it really did pull at my heartstrings. I'm glad you portrayed Jonghyun as someone struggling with war and as someone who needed something to not go insane. The paper cranes were perfect. It made Jonghyun so much more human :)
bewilderinglove
#3
This is AWESOME, just like your other fic :) It's creative and realistic and so so beautiful <3
JonghyunKaraOnew
#4
This is one of my topstories. C:
JulietteShawol1
#5
That was really good. I wish I could find more stories like it, with the imagery and the flow of the writing.
akane-
#6
Wow. This fanfic is just...really amazing. It's really meaningful and sweet.
You should write more and I'll be looking forward to more of your writing ^^