Chapter 1: wohoho
reading this feels so dreamy and beautiful n__n
it is like scene in a dream.. :DDD
"Sungmin would often stretch out his arms towards the refreshing and stunning view of the plains beneath them and sometimes, sing his heart out, followed soon by Kyuhyun’s baritone voice that made their voices harmonize with the shrill rustles of leaves against the strong winds."
I like that part the most!!!
b(^_^)d
This is so fairytale-like. The only thing ruining it for me is the mention of police cars. It would be much better if it was set in a village long time ago. Everything else indicate that it is and then BAM! Police car ._.
Otherwise it was beautiful!
Beautiful. Just utterly beautiful. You have an interesting style of writing that describes the story to its fullest and draws the audience in. Love it very much<3<3
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