Power

Description

The police in Seoul were long gone. So was the government, so was any form of law. Who ruled the city? The gangs did; different gangs, big and small (all lethal) control different part of the dangerous city. But no matter how much they control, they're always in a struggle for power...

Foreword

My first story on AFF, inspired by B.A.P's "Power" Teaser. There will be lots of different idols in here, but of course it will be starring our favorite aliens!

-ScissorsandElves

[EDIT 130310]

Okay. So I actually like this fic? But my style has changed a bit so when I read over it now I can spot room for improvement. So I'm going to do a major edit of this!

-ScissorsandElves

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LilyRose23 #1 Jun 25, 2014 09:21:59

Chapter 22: Ah, that was beautiful <3 I loved the vivid details you gave; I was able to picture the story as if it was a movie. Good job author-nim! As for improvements, that was well written so I can't think of any. Just a few spelling errors but if you skim over them after writing, then you'll spot them. I'm sad that Jongup had to die, but that created a suspense that fitted your story at the end as the war created chaos where many perished; both the good and evil. I'm just glad that Hyoyeon & Yongguk are together at the end <3 they are so cute together! Hehee thanks for a great story!

fanficholic #2 Jan 19, 2014 20:03:04

I loved this story and I seriously ship Yongguk & Hyoyeon :) GOSH, this is seriously a great story ^^

Raitoningu #3 Aug 11, 2013 16:29:50

Chapter 22: I read all of this in one sitting, It was so well-written I can't breathe. I want a sequel but I want Minzy alive though :((((( and a changed Minzy a very cunning minzy I WANT HER BACK okay enough of me :))) I love this Sequel please~

stellar #4 May 13, 2013 11:41:56

Ugh, I really loved this! I thought you were going to kill off Zelo but I'm glad you didn't. Jongup and CL though... T-T I'm kind of sad about the ending, I want to know more! But this was a great read, thank you for writing it~

kagamiwa #5 Oct 23, 2012 07:51:25

Chapter 22: okay, so I just finished this and JALKD;ASDA;;LS IT WAS AMAZING you're an amazing writer and I absolutely loved it /throws glitter around

to be honest there were a few grammatical errors but other than that everything was fine - the characterization, the action, the blood... I love it so much ;-;

also, I love the cliffhanger ending, cliffhanger endings are my favourite ;)
CONGRATS ON FINISHING YOUR FIRST FANFIC ! even if it is a little late C:

kagamiwa #6 Oct 23, 2012 07:16:36

Chapter 10: urgh this is so intense, I can't stop reading ;-;
the atmospheres you create is incredible, I can really feel the tension and the bloodthirst in the air ! can't wait to finish this :D

Smile_Dork #7 Sep 23, 2012 19:06:56

Chapter 22: Omg!!this story was awesome!!it need a sequel!!

Vicky_Zeng #8 Aug 8, 2012 09:38:11

Oh no poor Jong up. He's such a poor thing! >< Even though my dear Zelo survived I bet his soul is dead alr D:

midnighttrains #9 Jun 26, 2012 10:32:01

Wow, now i'm curious about what will happen between youngjae and jiyong and if theres a 2nd war. Omg, i hope theres a sequel. For a first fanfic, you're pretty good and unique or maybe i'm just biased since i prefer action, thrilling fanfics rather than cliche love stories.

boy-ish_shawol #10 Jun 26, 2012 05:39:42

Oh godd... What a story. *standing ovation* I hope to see another wonderful fanfic from you author-nim. This fic is intense. I like it so much esp when Minzy died. Wahahaa.