Fact and Fiction [Haitus]

Description

When you're stuck in a place you don't know, with people you've never seen and nobody knows their own name what do you do? Most simply block it out, try to ignore the nagging suspicion and questions in the back of their mind. But some dig for answers. 

Foreword

 

Image Credit;

Ver-sah-tyle.com/blogspot.
Maker; ami91luvKey

 

Chapters List

Chapter 1 - Day or Dream

Chapter 2 - Questions Unanswered

Chapter 3 - Caught Between Delusion and Reality

Chapter 4 - Moments of Peace

Chapter 5 - A Day Gone By

Chapter 6 - The Blood Sea

Chapter 7 - Confrontation verses Examination

Chapter 8 - Heading towards Destruction

Chapter 9 - Protection or Restriction

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Character List;

 

 

GIVEN NAME: Woohyun
GIVEN NUMBER: #432-10
UNIT: 7

AREA CODE: Garlean 

CONTRIBUTION: 3M - 2F - LS

 

  

GIVEN NAME: Dongwoo

GIVEN NUMBER: No available data.
UNIT: No available data.


AREA CODE: No available data.
CONTRIBUTION: 7M - 3F 

    

GIVEN NAME: Sungkyu

GIVEN NUMBER: Invalid
UNIT: Invalid


AREA CODE: Confidential    
CONTRIBUTION: 2M - 1F - LS       

 

GIVEN NAME: Sungjong

GIVEN NUMBER: Invalid

UNIT: Invalid
AREA CODE: Confidential
CONTRIBUTION: 1F

 

 

GIVEN NAME: Howon
GIVEN NUMBER: Invalid

UNIT: Invalid

AREA CODE: Confidential
CONTRIBUTION: 2M - 3F - LS

 

 

 

GIVEN NAME: Myungsoo

GIVEN NUMBER: #490-23

UNIT: 8

AREA CODE: Garlean

CONTRIBUTION: 2M - 1F - LS

 

 

GIVEN NAME: Sungyeol

GIVEN NUMBER: #001-29
UNIT: 1


AREA CODE: No Available Data

CONTRIBUTION: 2M - 1F - LS

 

  

GIVEN NAME: Naeveh
GIVEN NUMBER: #590-29

UNIT: 11

AREA CODE: Garlean
CONTRIBUTION: 3M

GIVEN NAME: Faye

GIVEN NUMBER: #358-93
UNIT: 6


AREA CODE: Garlean

CONTRIBUTION: 1M - 1F - LS

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Onebrightstar #1
Another great chapter! To be honest, to me it feels like Myungsoo has two different sides to him. A very playful one and a darker one, probably for protecting Faye, but he makes such a radical change in behavior! Well, he really must love her alot if he's able to switch so quick between different moods.
My heart is reaching out for Faye. She's suffering in silence, poor child! I really want to console her...

It seems everyone who has been introduced already, suffers from those nightmares. No need to give hints, of course xD I wouldn't want to ruin your writing pleasure :p
I hope Naeveh will be able to clear her head a bit when she's able to work her shifts and doesn't need to dwell on those nightmares too often. Mmmh, all those questions to figure out, I love it :D

And... this may seem stupid, but there's something that bothered me a little bit. In your foreword, you wrote a profile for every member. Is there a reason why you wrote 'Howan' instead of 'Howon' or is it just a typo? I feel stupid for asking, actually :p

Holy wow, a Kpop fan for already seven years? I feel like such a noob right now xD for me it's almost two years :3
'The Chaser' is a good song, but for me it isn't as epic as other title songs. 'Feel so bad', 'In the summer' and 'Only tears' are my fave from the album. Hoya has actually a very nice singing voice, as well as Dongwoo (I looove Dongwoo's lines in 'In the summer') They both sound husky and have a good control over their voices. They aren't called triple threats for nothing :3
I'm actually digging Sungjong's looks. He looked really fine and mature. I'm starting to have trouble seeing him as a little brother. Sungyeol indeed had not that many lines, but he recieved alot of spotlight in the MV. Myungsoo too, but he was rolling in that car for about 4 minutes O.O

Thanks for updating and stay healthy! ^o^
inspirit95
#2
Ohmygosh, you don't know how amazing this is.
I've been a crazy person reading the seven chapters and i was totally captivated. I'm not a night person, so i don't stay up late but this is totally worth it! (Plus i've got presentation tomorrow). LOL.
You're an awesome writer and i hope this motivates you to continue writing. (:
Seems like the red sea is not there for nothing.. Makes me want to keep reading on, and you don't know how disappointed i was when there was no "next chapter". HAHAHA.
But i'll wait. That's just how awesome you are. <3
Onebrightstar #3
Haha,glad you found Faye and know where to head to with the story :) It seems as if the Blood Sea will play an important role in the story. Maybe this whole strange world is build up around the sea and its existence. And maybe everyone has somehow a connection with it... I'm rambling on and probably searching for links which don't excist :p

Now, did you manange to listen to a few of the new Infinite tracks? I'm still replaying some of the songs, and they're growing on me :D
PinkMarygoldDreams
#4
Waah~ I love this story, I'm so hooked ^^
A real chill runs through my spine when I visualize the blood sea. Dying by choking on your relatives blood sounds so horrible D:
You're amazing (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
And yay Myungsoo isn't the typical ice prince that everyone else makes him out to be.
And when will Neaveh finnaly take a shower lol? Or did she do that while checking out the bathroom, I haven't seem to have caught it.
Onebrightstar #5
There's definitely room for Faye to develop, that's for sure. I think she can attribute to the story without getting the whole storyline messed up. Right now, I see her as someone popping in from time to time, sorting out some things for Naeveh, and then disappearing again.

It seems like there is still something going on between Myungsoo and Faye. Some shared, dark secret which has not yet been revealed. Myungsoo is rather protective of it, despite his earlier playful attitude. Must be something quite heavy to keep, that secret, or he wouldn't make that radical change in behaviour.

Woohyun was a sweetheart, as usual :) When describing the furniture and the shower, it seemed so futuristic and yet I could visualise it in my head. It sounds really helpful and fun :D

I'm definitely excited for their comeback :) Less than a week away, and with the ballad they released two days ago, I'm definitely looking forward to their new single. Some people were confused at first by the teaser photo, because they did not recognise Woohyun and Dongwoo at first. I was one of them, to be honest. I had such a hard time to spot Dongwoo! What a shame, he's my bias... I'm sure we can keep our expectations high for their comeback :D

And I'll still say this: Thank you for updating! Because I'm truly grateful you did so. :D
Onebrightstar #6
Hooray, another chapter! This one was honestly very cute and charming. Both Myungsoo and Woohyun have sweet personalities, and I think I might like Faye too if I know her better :) And about Myungsoo his personality, that's also the side I see of him during shows. He's rather playful and smiles alot, and I honestly prefer him more that way than his personality on stage.

About the clues hidden in the story. I think her name is one of the clues, but I don't know if it's a good idea to put this spoiler here in this comment. It would spoil the fun of other readers :)

And really, it's me who should be thanking you for sharing such a wonderful story :) And thank you for updating!
Onebrightstar #7
Thank you for updating :)it seems there are even more questions right now than answers, and I feel like I'm on a hunt to find the answers myself which makes it really fun to read. I like the pace you keep in your story. You introduce the strange world and the characters little by little instead of all of them at the same time, so it's easy to go with the flow of the story.

You are doing a good job with keeping the curiosity up, so there's no need to worry for that :)I positively cracked up at the 'Woobear'. It's refreshing to see Myungsoo being greasy.

Once again, thanks for updating! =)
Onebrightstar #8
I like the story thus far! I'm really curious as to know where they actually are, what their purpose is, how they ended up in that place, and more importantly, if it's a good thing they are in that strange place. It's a perfect mix of mystery and fantasy, and I enjoyed the first two chapters of it! Keep up the good work :)