Chapter 1: Why does this have only one chapter? This is an AMAZING story! Great job!

Chapter 1: I personally love this line... "The green monster created a home inside of me, nestled deep in my chest cavity, cradling my heart with orchestra, it's claws plucking at the strings." I don't even know why, but for me, I guess, it described the magnitude of her pain in such a poetic way. I sympathized with her but then I was entranced by that pain as well.

Anyway, this was beautiful and captivating. All the details, the signals that Jiho really liked her made me smile. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your writing makes me want to bang my head against a brick out of jealousy. I'm officially declaring us friends, with or without your consent.

so nicely written. and it was somewhat poetic in a way. i really enjoyed how you described everything. this was amazing.

I have to say this.
This one's so greatly written.
You're amazing :3 so poetic.
Love this <333

it describes everything how can you such a good writer, just like i've read some pocketbooks, well good luck.... i like super....

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/176995/experience-love-sacrifice-dream-englishkorean YEAH! finished reading it! please if you have time,read my story also thanks!! this is about b1a4 and block b! thanks!

WHY YOU MAKE ME HATE YOU CHA? That was so undeniably beautiful. I demand more fanfiction of yours to happen this summer. YOU WILL NOT DISAPPOINT! Even if it's a drabble of 100 words, I will take it.

I'm gonna be back writing one-shots and stories this summer. Already working on one idea as we speak. As always...I'll find room for you in there somewhere :)

That was amazing. I really liked the metaphor between an orchestra and your feelings. Very well done :D

AAAAAAH that was beautifully written! I really, really liked it adfsdgdfhfghgj
I hope you'll write a sequel. the ending is a total cliffhanger ;___;