ummm hi?

w-what!?
Sun-Yung's pov I stare at her with a shocked look on my face. We stop at a red light and she looks over at me while smiling "Hello im amber" "Umm hi? So why are you kidnaping me?" I ask confused. " well im not really kidnaping you if you wanted to leave that place right?" She says sounding like a teacher. " smarty pants." I mumble. She chuckles and turns back her seat then starts driving again. "so whats your favrite color "Red" i say flatly "No way that my favrite color. Hmmm favrite food?" "Spicy rice cakes" "Favrite candy?" "Pockys" its not really a candy but i call it candy. (Another reason my parents call me stupied) "Hmmmm favrite ice cream flavor?" " why do you wanna know so many anserws to so many questions?" I say pretty ticked off."a coisen should get to know her coisen." She says "Eh?" "Wow your dumb. Its right in the sentence, we..are..coisens"
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stellarstarlight
#1
this looks excite!
ilove2smile
#2
btw, your short but concise description grabbed my attention..
but, when you add the SJ part, it was too sudden...
suggestion: maybe add a transition like saying something about how she gets famous and meets all sort of Kpop bands like super junior

eh not to sound picky or anything.. I just like giving advise keke
ilove2smile
#3
nicee
update soon :P

could you read or maybe subscribe to my ff? haha thanks, it means a lot to me and I appreciate it haha XD
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