My savior

w-what!?
Sun-yee's pov i was sleeping till i heard something from downstairs. My first instinct was that it was just my imagenation or it was my brother. He ussally does that. So i layed back down and closed my eyes. *CRASH* I shot up like a bullet. Now i know its not my brother. Then i heard footsteps coming to my room. I was trying to scoot and hide under the covers so the person (i think) wouldn't see me, but im so unlucky. She/he saw me and almost ran tords me. I screemed......well atleast atempted to. The person covered my mouth and lead my downstairs,to the door,out onto the lawn tords a car.(im guessing was that person's car) she/he put me in the passenger's seat and we started driving. I was kinda scared to go to sleep but,it felt like i could trust this person. After a few minutes i soon fell assleep. ~6 hours later~ I woke up and looked around and you will never guess who i saw in the driver's seat.............………………………………………………………………………f(x) Amber!
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stellarstarlight
#1
this looks excite!
ilove2smile
#2
btw, your short but concise description grabbed my attention..
but, when you add the SJ part, it was too sudden...
suggestion: maybe add a transition like saying something about how she gets famous and meets all sort of Kpop bands like super junior

eh not to sound picky or anything.. I just like giving advise keke
ilove2smile
#3
nicee
update soon :P

could you read or maybe subscribe to my ff? haha thanks, it means a lot to me and I appreciate it haha XD
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