I'm The Tourist And You're The Mona Lisa I Can't Have

Description

Whenever I look at you, my heart aches. Why can't you look at me and only me? You're always with that man. He's all you can ever see. But he doesn't know you like I do. He can't treat you like I can. Mina, you're supposed to be the one that knows me most, and yet, you still haven't realized it yet? Can't you tell? I love you.

Foreword

She smiled brightly and began to laugh. Her voice was so sweet, so pure. Her eyes twinkled. But I knew it wasn't for me. It was all for him. Everything she did, everything she hoped, everything she dreamed of, was all for him.

She looked up. "Ah, Mir!" She greeted. "I didn't see you there, good morning." Again, it's that look in her eyes.

Of course you didn't see me. You simply can't. All you can see with those eyes of yours is him. Just what do you see in him?

I smiled weakly. "Morning Mina."

She nodded and went right back to talking to him. It didn't take long for her to smile. Her bright smile, her sweet and pure voice. I loved it all. But it wasn't for me. It was for him and him only.

Mina, open your eyes and look at me and me only. What do you see?

I turned my back to her and walked into the school building. She didn't even bother to say goodbye.

I felt a tug at my heartstrings.

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Irene91 #1
Chapter 6: it was wonderful! im really thankful that i got to read such a beautiful piece...
as soon as you brought the story of the two gardeners, i could feel things were going to go awry... it was totally heart wrenching in the end! i totally felt for hyojun... he was such a selfless guy and deserved the love he had been giving all the while... but i never even once felt distant from mir either... and in the end, when he has sacrificed his own wellbeing for the other two,... and that line about him not being able to resist going over the "if"s in his mind... it totally broke my heart... it was the most familiar feeling i have read in any fanfics... and im sry for mir, but i suppose he will have to handle those thoughts for a whole lifetime now.. its not like you can undo your feelings however much you try... unfortunately :((
AN0NYM0US #2
@chrysanttwu: I wonder if you'll ever look back to this story and check the comments like I'm doing now, but I'll reply just in case you'll ever get to see this. Thanks for all the support and the bother of commenting even this story is already marked complete. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I'm thankful for you words of motivation. :DDD
chrysanttwu
#3
dear lovely Author-nim..I love your story, like seriously.. I love it. I cry for mir's love and sincere. made me think a lot about different side of love :) thank you for share this story. keep writing~ love, chrysant :D
AN0NYM0US #4
@plinaaa2304: Thank you! Oh, the compliments I'm recieving. I am so happy... which explains why I am replying back even though this story is clearly completed. XD Glad this was entertaining to you!
@hellopanda: Did the ending disappoint you? Sorry... if it did. (Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry~) And yeah, it would've been totally awesome if you read this while I was updating... but hey, you still read this fanfic at least! (And I am so grateful for that)
plinaaa2304 #5
one of the best fanficr i've ever read. Thank you for sharing this :)
hellopanda23 #6
....awww.. i knew the ending couldn't have been ...mir got her..since the title implied it right? ha ha ha.. gosh that was a good one!!! ahh i wish i could have read this when you were updating.. it was reallyyy good
AN0NYM0US #7
@JOKERZ: Did I already mention that I love reading your comments? Man, your comments make my day, like seriously. And I will gladly accept those gifts. :DDD
lavish_queen
#8
T-T its over!
Me crying!
It was.just soo good!
Mir!!!
Gosh i lovedbthis story!
I'm so glad i read your story!,
I just purly love ur writing!,
I hope u make other great stories
Like.this!*throws a million roses at ur
feet and cookies* enjoy ma gifts!
AN0NYM0US #9
@KeinWoolover1998: I'm actually surprised that my readers have such... strong feelings towards this story. (Hope that sounded right) And yes, he will be confessing. Soon, VERY soon.
@JOKERZ: OMG, I always love your comments. So, of course, yes, I am always patient to read them! XD Ah... the compliments. :D Thank you! :DDD
Isabelle_98_
#10
I WANNA CRY! MIR JUST CONFESS. I KNOW YOU LOVE HER SO JUST EFFING CONFESS~~~~~~~~~