Rainbow Promise

Description

 

The cotton candy like clouds filled the darkening sky.
It’s substance of watery fluid had already drowned the city.
Memories. They were too deeply rooted for the liquid to wash away.
 
"Wait and I'll come when the rainbow guides me to you."

Foreword

 

This drabble with act as an entry to a writing contest;; 
Captured Moments

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oppArz #1
omg i love lay!
blackpotato #2
Chapter 1: simple but sweet..
like..like..like... ^^
p3bbles #3
Chapter 1: It's a good story. Kinda bittersweet and u ended it just right. But I couldn't help thinking about leprechaun when u wrote the rainbow guiding him to her. Lolx...
kpop-maniac #4
Chapter 1: hon. u should consider writing a novel and publishing it. soon, it will be the best seller and people will be racing to get one copy, remember. I will be the first in the line. fighting! oh, and the fanfic is sensational^.^ u are the author of the year!
Kpopism #5
Chapter 1: THIS STORY WAS SO SWEET!!!
boog1e #6
Holy shet, you're one of the best writers I've ever come across on this site.This was beautiful! And as for the contest, you're well worth it. And lol, LAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY -dies-
RicE3looD #7
Omg, that was.. amazing! And girl I'll get slowly into the EXO fever. xD
ChaeYo #8
veekay@ thank you, well, I didn't want to make it too long either,
it would've just destroy the feeling I wanted to express =/
veekay #9
I really liked this.
Too bad it was short. :|

You're a good writer. ^^
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