Won't Go Home Without You

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Hi, I'm obviously not a writer, but I have a story to share. I thought about this scenario after listening to Maroon 5's song, hence the title of the story. Pardon the lack of skills and technicalities. :( Hope you enjoy this one shot. Give the amateur, ehem, a break. ;)

Foreword

 

"Won't Go Home Without You" by Maroon 5

 

I asked her to stay but she wouldn't listen
She left before I had the chance to say
Oh
The words that would mend the things that were broken
But now it's far too late, she's gone away

Every night you cry yourself to sleep
Thinking: "Why does this happen to me?
Why does every moment have to be so hard?"
Hard to believe that

It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you

The taste of your breath, I'll never get over
The noises that she made kept me awake
Oh
The weight of things that remained unspoken
Built up so much it crushed us everyday

Every night you cry yourself to sleep
Thinking: "Why does this happen to me?
Why does every moment have to be so hard?"
Hard to believe that

It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you

It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you

Of all the things I felt but never really shown
Perhaps the worst is that I ever let you go
I should not ever let you go, oh oh oh

It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you

It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you
And I won't go home without you
And I won't go home without you
And I won't go home without you
 
 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4jFVPsTEfM

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mimi_qitchi #1
Chapter 1: U must make sequel for this story.....
Joyvin #2
Awesome story!! Rlly nicely written.
jjae96
#3
waaaaaaaaaa! now i get it!
such a great story!

a SEQUEL would be great!! CHU! (^O^)
Kiwa8D #4
Gd only realising how important she is when she leaves *shakes head* but I do hope theres Part 2 : P
queenchaerin #5
Hello dear friends :) sorry if u felt like i left u guys hanging.. but thats kinda the point of linking it to the song.. @littletea: u definitely got my point, if u listen to the song, ur imagination would lead u to the ending, and as it said, Ji wont go home without Chae! So reading between the songs line, its a good ending. I just didnt want to paint an exact picture, leaving readers options on how they envision it would end based on the song. Hope this helps :)
littletea
#6
here's the sequel readers:

"It's not over tonight
Just give me one more chance to make it right
I may not make it through the night
I won't go home without you"

~ :3
eternal
#7
yessss pls make a sequel....please make em together>.>
cl_jiD #8
oh can you make a sequel? :)
Thanhmai #9
Continue, please~!
luvone
#10
Yeah, he acts really like a jerk -_-
Don't give up easily, Chae. But to be noted: Please, still, come back to him in the end, okay ^^