Third Year High school

If Only

The phone strike. On the other end was Minho. He was in tears inarticulate how his homies left him. He wanted me to go there, so I did. As I sat next to him on the sofa, I stared at his beautiful, brown eyes, wishing he was mine. After two hours watching basketball movie and eating chips, he decided to go to sleep. He
looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

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pikachu16 #1
I'm crying. T.T
summerxblessings
#2
This story is really short but it's good! :)
Is English your first language? It's really good if it isn't---but some of the big words you used aren't used properly (?) or it takes me (an English speaking person who's stronger subject is English) a while to understand.
Good job nevertheless! :)
Time to go off and read your other stories! :)
JoJoChoco
#3
Hmm
Just a question,
For every chapter
do u mean 4th day not year?
cuz time would have gone pretty fast if it was eyar..
Asian_Rice
#4
That was probably one of the epicest (is that a word???) short story i have ever read. It was so sad T^T