I'm crying. T.T

This story is really short but it's good! :)
Is English your first language? It's really good if it isn't---but some of the big words you used aren't used properly (?) or it takes me (an English speaking person who's stronger subject is English) a while to understand.
Good job nevertheless! :)
Time to go off and read your other stories! :)

Hmm
Just a question,
For every chapter
do u mean 4th day not year?
cuz time would have gone pretty fast if it was eyar..

That was probably one of the epicest (is that a word???) short story i have ever read. It was so sad T^T