Chapter 1: wow this is one interesting story :) good job authornimm!!

Well... First of all wat an amazing story!! But u should have talked to him or ask 4 his number randomly like it is not a big deal!! But overall it's an amazing story!!!

Chapter 1: nice one eh... i had same thing when i'm curious i can't stop myself from looking at that person and then boom when he/she look back its kinda awkward... ^^

Chapter 1: u should make a sequel !!!
nice story..

Awww.. :'(

This is beautiful. Amazing.

Haha I do that alot when I'm riding the subway :)
Great story! :D

This is actually fate... =)

Sequel....

Short but sweet! ^^