Subway (One shot feat Kim Jaejoong and OC)

Description

Hello Everyone!

It's my first fanfic and first attempt on oneshots. 

This story is actually inspired by this couple that I saw at the subway station one time I was going home from school.

They were displaying too much public affection and it kind of bothered me. LOL. But thanks to them because a story came to life. xP

Hope you enjoy my story!! 

P.S  Constructive criticisms are welcome =)

 

Note: English is not my mother tongue so you might find grammatical errors and typos and pardon me for that. Also you may find some words that are either awkward or too formal. My apologies for that too ><

Comments

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faridpraderago #1
Chapter 1: this is so sweet and cute^^
i'm glas i find this one
Hanifah #2
Oh my God it's so sweet, I can't resist. Love it :)
yasmien #3
Chapter 1: Wait i can't believe there's no comments yet for this story!!it's so sweet and simply lovely!i like it! :)