@PigRabbit1912: thankyou for reading and commenting~
and yeah, that part is really bothering me to but I don't know how to change that. thanks for the point! I really appreciate it~ :)

yay! cute story luv it! especially how u includes periods of his life! cute! but can i please point out something? when u said: He don’t know how his condition if he not with Doojoon anymore, i think u meant: He doesn't know he will be like if Doojoon leave him... sorry! it was rlly bothering me... it was a rlly good story otherwise...

@MoonLight7: thank you for reading! dooseob ftw!!
my friends help me with the grammar.. :)

aww~! this is so sweet :D
Doojoon and yoseob are meant to be together<333333
your English was Good and i envy you ><

@b2utifulyeobo: thank you for reading~! yeah, this is my 1st english fanfic and my friends help me with the grammar
glad you like it! :D