Chapter 23: This is so beautiful, I love it ^^

Chapter 23: Hnnn...first off, I don't want to offend with my critiques. I will tell you the truth (and it might sound harsh so you can just skip this paragraph and the next if you want). Anything less would be an injustice and an insult to the both of us.

Honestly speaking, the structure of the story is weak. There are a lot of holes in the story (like how the wedded couple haven't even had any ___ after a few months of marriage? Impossible) and towards the end, it is an apparently rushed job as if you are making the most of it with a compilation of paper and pasting everything with glue. I'm not even going to touch on grammars.

That said, we go to the next thing. For the record, I'm not saying that the work is bad. Hey, I stuck till the end, that means something, right? I like some of the ideas behind it, just the little details now and again.

(bows) thanks for the read.

This was beautifully written, and I am glad Jongup still waited even though he had already given up hope!:) this was truly remarkable and I cried for a little bit but I loved the end "Sir, is this your story?"
Amazing!!!:3

This... is... ;_________;
I want to try having Daehyun as my teacher. Lol. xD
And Jongup changed~ :'D I'm so happy. The ending is worth all the angst.

Thank you for writing this fic~ ;w;

congratulation for completing this awesome storyy ~~~ This is the firs ever DaeJong fanfic i've read ((:

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
i love both of u.. thats sweet..
good work, writer.. :D

jongup.. --'
just be with daehyun..

WHY OH WHY MUST YOUNGJAE E IN THIS STORY? :(((

Youngjae! Get away from Daehyun! >_<
Jongup! Stop being stupid and get Daehyun! xD

Noo wae must DaeHyun like YoungJae? Lol he needs to like JongUp ! Nao lol jk but thanks for the update