Darkness (Oneshot)

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Yunho thought that his relationship with JaeJoong was perfect. That their love was as strong as when they met. How wrong he was. Now all he had was darkness surround him. Light seemed to have disappeared from his life. Nothing matter to him anymore.

Foreword

I know I said I wouldn't post anything until this week was over but I wrote this on a scrap piece of paper after I finished my exam. I just had to post it so you guys can tell me what you think of it.

I know it's a bit angsty but for some reason this was in my mind and I just had to write it down. I didn't mean to break them up but like I said this was in my mind and I just had to write it.

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hyunsaeng4ever #1
@hurleysunn I know it wasn't really clear, but all I said was that JaeJoong didn't love Yunho anymore so there was no reason for him to stay with Yunho.
hurleysunn #2
but WHY?? i wanna know why he left him like that :o(<br />
stupid stupid Joongie!
hyunsaeng4ever #3
@Asian_Innocence Hahaha thanks... I guess. =)<br />
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If people read this I'm only saying this online because ms.no face is sitting right next to me. =)
Asian_Innocence #4
Hey girl! Its me, the annonymous reader w/o a face =9 since you told me not to tell you what i think I'll just give you my reaction: awwww, -hand clutch on heart- awwww Yunhoooooo ='( <br />
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lolz
hyunsaeng4ever #5
@BrightNinj4 Hahaha it's ok that happens to me to. I don't know about continuing this. Like I said I wrote this while in class. I'll think about it. Hahaha in fact right now my mind is going beyond this. Maybe, maybe I'll add one or two chapters, but I don't know. Give me time.
BrightNinj4 #6
aww you should continue this! it would make a good story for a few chapters...like idk..wait let me think...<br />
OH! i gots it!<br />
you could show JYJ and Homin "seperation" (AKTF)<br />
or something like jae has a flashback and it shows yunho's family or some girl telling him to leave and lies about yunho not loving him!<br />
oh idk! but it could work! of course it's all up to you:) just putting ideas out there...sorry my mind runs free too much and so does my mouth...well fingers...sorry<br />
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