If I Don't Say it Now...

Description

Minho is struggling to come up with the right lyrics for his next rap segment so he asks Eunhyuk who gladly agrees to help.  It doesn't hurt that he can help with the choreography for the dance routine either; or that the tall rapper has a crush on the other man.  With the two alone in the same room and no other distractions, will Minho be able to tell Eunhyuk how he feels?

Foreword

Based on a new (and highly entertaining) game me and my roommates recently came up with involving the names of Super Junior and Shinee members in a hat, I was asked to write a Eunkyuk and Minho one shot.  Here is the result.  Enjoy.  ^_^

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cheekyone94 #1
Chapter 1: WOOHOO I got to read two of your stories in one night.

I may like all of the other stories I gotten through so far but I wasn't expecting to like this one. The reason why is because I'm not a fan of Shinee. (I'm sorry if this offends you, a lot of people thinks it offensive when I say I don't like Shinee) I found this really cute and oddly enough I liked it. I like that it was comfortable for them in the end while at the start on the inside they were nervous.

I think i'm becoming jealous of your writing style since no matter what the story is it just flows well and they are believable. Maybe it because I can't write story that i'm jealous and is the reason I have no story on my account.
Keep up the awesome work and look forward to the next story I pick when I have time. :)
Frosty_Maiden #2
Chapter 1: Okay give me a second to fangirl and spazz..... ASKCHDIENVMSLFF!!!! *flails and throws arms around myself*
THIS WAS SO CUTE AND AHH MINHO AND EUNHYUK?? SERIOUSLY!! AHAHAHAAH!!

*coughs* Okay right to business

I like your characterisations, the way Eunhyuk seems unhappy with changing lyrics and bites the pen for example, it just feels so human and realistic. Like I am watching this play out in front of me.
Also when Minho gets annoyed at his hair and uses the scrunchie, I just really fell into this story.

This is another perfectly flowing story, its so believable that I can see this happening in reality. You make the feeling seem so natural, the nervousness, the shy glances, the way Eunhyuk changes personality when dancing...I just find myself going WOW...and OOOOO. Its really something to read your work.

Its impossible to find anything here I would change, I mean the way it just flowed was beautiful. This is pure fluff, genius fluff.
Your spelling and grammar are perfect, your style is so warm and enticing. You can change your style too for each story and I like that.

I just enjoy the casual comfort between them, its so normal.
I like how perfect the kiss is, simple yet utterly blissful. Its not ual or ty. Just an intense sharing of love.

Also your ability to swap between Eunhyuks and Minho's POV's is flawless. ARGH I FEEL LIKE AM USELESS AT GIVEN ANY APPROPRIATE COMMENTING BECAUSE THERE IS NOTHING TO AID YOU WITH....LOL
diamante25 #3
Chapter 1: This is an amazing story!!!! I love pairing Minho up with hyungs from different groups other than his bands! I'm so glad I read this.
impaktita #4
Chapter 1: this should have more fb's. It was well written. aish! people.
criscee #5
Aww...I like it!:D
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