Visus

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Visus: Sight in Latin

Genre: Fantasy

 

Infinite

 

Lee Song Mi

 

Random idea attacked my brain when I was walking home :)

 

A/N: Since AFF doesn't have my chapters yet and I don't know if I will have to repost. Or if they'll come back. And if they do come back I don't want double posts. I'm starting a new story. XD

Foreword

 

I had to run away, I had to make it. They can't get me, that's what I've always been told.

 

"Once they know you can see them, you have run. Run away as fast as you can. Don't let them get you."

 

That's what my mom always told me, before she died.

 

"Hello, excuse me miss." a red haired boy stood in front of me. His eyes flickered red.

 

Demon. I ran in the opposite direction.

 

"Hey, miss! Come back!" he yelled, chasing after me.

 

Anywhere but here. This has never happened before. Never. I could live peacefully before.

 

"Hey little lady, what's your name?" A muscular guy with an eye smile said to me. Yellow.

 

Werewolf.

 

Definitely run some more.

 

"Come back here!" he yelled after me.

 

Two creatures here! Why? Why chase me? For what purpose?

 

A girl stood in front of me, she smirked. "You should just give up on running you know. We will always find you again." she grinned as her eyes changed.

 

Frick. Pink. Fairies too?

 

What is up with everyone chasing me?


I ran down the alley and appeared on the other end. But I bumped into another person.

 

"I'm so sorry, are you okay?" he said concerned, as he held me, from falling down.

 

I was sure I was shaking badly from the running and being scared.

 

I nodded my head, before I turned up to look at him. He was handsome, so perfectly handsome.

 

But it was too good to be true, his eyes flickered before me and they changed to purple. He was a vampire, no wonder he was impossibly beautiful.

 

I looked down the alley, the demon lied in wait.

 

I looked up to the roof and saw the smirking fairy glaring.

 

I looked to my right and the werewolf was grinning at me, waiting for me to run.

 

They had closed in on me, all I was left with was trust the vampire or try run away some more.

 

"Help me."

 
A/N:
hehe :3 sooo.. here it is~
I hope you like it~! Another fantasy story hehe :3
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Do not post anywhere else.  Do not plagiarize.

 

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Disclaimer: I do not own Infinite, Super Junior, 4minute, KARA, T-Ara, Teen Top, or BEAST. Slightly inspired by Negima! I only own my original character and the plotline. Any similarities to other stories, books, etc, are purely coincidence.

Started: March 13th, 2012.

Finished: June 18th, 2012.

 

Rianne2580
Visus: If everyone could help me out on my homework for class, I'll love you guys forever:3 It's my most recent blog post please and thank you~

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Vampirexy192
#1
Chapter 51: I would say this story is alright. Well, I do feel interesting but somehow it was rather dull in my opinion. Please don't take this as offensive. >.< First, is the lack of chemistry between the two main characters. In which, the female character didn't have a distinct personality or should I say that a certain characteristics. Like I don't know if she was a sweet type or anything but what I knew is that she was a kind girl. :) That's all. And I couldn't feel the tension when there were actions or hell broke lose. Writing about the kidnapping consecutively is rather I don't know...It was somehow careless for them not very attentive to protect her. The lesson from the first event should be learned. But hey, it's your story. You can do whatever you want. xD I'm just stating my opinion. Also, I would love to see the interaction between other characters more deeply. Like give a lil bit of montage of their bonding especially between two protagonist. Yes, I know when people face dangers or been through hell together. They easily fall in love within a short time because they trust each other. I can see that but I want more. Your genre already stated a romance, so show more romance between them despite everything happen to them. And the drama, not so much expressed in here. I think but hey maybe because the chapters were too short and it seems rush. It's okay, you will improve and become better. I'm sure of it. :D Sorry, if it seems harsh to you but I don't have any intention but try to help you. ^.^v Anyway, love your story! ♥
matogalaxyV
#2
Chapter 50: daaaaaamn three days? lol
elfcassopeia #3
Chapter 51: A lot of thought has been put into this story to make it work abd the plot is pretty unique too! Definitely a great read, over and over again.
sullivanyoo
#4
Chapter 50: Aw man. That's like so sweet ;; great job!
sullivanyoo
#5
Chapter 50: Aw man. That's like so sweet ;; great job!
sullivanyoo
#6
Chapter 49: Awwww dayuuuum woohyun. Just dayum.
sullivanyoo
#7
Chapter 34: My cheeks are burning gaaaaaaaaah
sullivanyoo
#8
Chapter 33: Uuuuuuuuuuu >///<
sullivanyoo
#9
Chapter 32: That was.... Erm eue
sullivanyoo
#10
Chapter 27: i would say that is a simple kiss and beetles in the tummy OuO