This is the new story I’m working on. Hi guys! So, I reeeaaaally hope you won’t go, “, write Goodbye, my only love already!”

Don’t worry! I’ll promise to update the two stories as fast as I can. The other story I’m starting to draft, so rest assured! The chapters will be out by tomorrow by latest.

To the readers who’ve read ‘Goodbye, my only love’, do you mind reading this, too? Because I’m seriously lacking readers and subscribers here.

Oh, one more thing. This is the THIRD FARKING TIME I’VE WROTE THIS. I dunno what happened. Okay, the first time was partially my fault, but the second wasn’t. You guys do know what happened to AFF for the past few days, yes? Well, I’m guessing they’ve deleted my story. I guess. But, don’t worry! Third time’s the charm, right? So, I’ll make this better than the two much better updates I’ve sadly lost!

WARNING. STRICT. THIS STORY WILL BE OF KILLING OFF THE BOYS. IT WILL CONTAIN ANGST, HORROR, GORE, CILFF HANGERS, BLOODY SCREAMS, CURSING AND ALL OF THAT. And I will write the females of the story as the bad guys. BEWARE.

This story I came up with myself, so don’t do plagiarizing!

-Lulu

Description, and all the things you’ll need to know.

THE STORY.

In another universe, lives two earth like planets that lived close to each other, full of human-being like beings. They had what our earth had, and it was exactly the same. Nothing was different. Well, maybe slight changes, but I’ll settle that later.

There were two gods, brother and sister, who ruled one of the planets. There was Mercury, the god of the Sun and Minerva, the god of the Moon. The two planets loved in harmony until ‘BAM!’. Mercury decided to destroy his sister’s moon, taking her life force, millions of years ago. That, of course, had angered the Goddess. She then broke the peace between the two worlds and ruled over Ruby, the planet of Women, while her -of-a-brother ruled Sapphire, the planet of the apes (men, if you put it in a nice name.)

The two worlds were always in peace and harmony, both of the planets had the same amount of Guys and Girls, namely Crocells and Kaymises. They had an equal amount of both the genders on both sides, until their Gods declared war upon another. They fled, hating the other species to their bones, and every fiber. That’s how things went. Sapphire was the world with Males whilst the other with Females. And times were the hardest for them ever since.

As revenge, after recovering from her brother’s foolish act which almost killed her, she designed a game.

What game, you might ask? Well, that’s another story.

THE STORY OF THE TWO ES.

They look like us, think like us, do what we do. Breaths, eat, and sleep, just like us. Hell, they even have fancy pets! They are our clones, as you can call them. An exact replica of us. Just that the Males were better looking than the Females.

But that’s where the similarities stop.

They are nowhere near human beings. They can live up to more than ten thousand years, and they stop ageing when they are a few hundred years old, looking like a 20 year old in human years. Their parents are either both guys, a normal couple, as in a guy and girl, or both girls. Both of the es can impregnate and get pregnant. But I will not dawdle on that.

Most of them have a special ability, and those who don’t can seriously pass as a regular human being. As a normal person over at their place.

When the two genders were separated at first, they didn’t even mind it, not one bit. It was nothing really new to them, the only changes were that they had to marry the same . Yeah, they are all a bunch of homos. But who cared? It was law, practically.

They have buildings, just like us. But not really all those fancy, modern ones. They live in castles and log cabins and apartments, if they can build it themselves. Both of their native tongue is Korean, mind you.

One more thing: Just in case you didn't know, they will always hate each other, no matter what. No one really knows why they can't forgive.

Crocells:

The males. They are said to be better looking than the Kaymises, and much more resourceful. Not to mention smarter and kinder than them. They are the caring ones, although they might react negatively towards strangers. The Crocells live in a poorer surrounding, compared with the Kaymises. They live in Sapphire, where they only have Mercury as their god. There were only a handful of them, only a small fraction compared with the Kaymis.

Now, even though they are usually cute and cuddly and such, they have different abilities. They are super humans, each of them with a different ability. Although it may be repeated throughout history that a few hundred of them have the same power. Their powers are unlimited, from superhuman strength, to wall climbing, and telepathy. You name em’, they’ve got em’.

When they do have the power, they have a birthmark that is right above the hip. It’s always a different design and color, judging on their ability. Their eyes also tell stories. They can change color, but only into the color just life their birthmark when they feel emotional. Scared, shock, sadness, love, angry, happy and loved. They change colors when the feeling is to overpowering. 

They were forced to leave their parents when they were just mere children ageing from a few hundred years old. They are forced to bring their child to the Base, and make sure he won’t recognize them when he’s older. It was also a law. That’s why the birth rate was getting lower and lower.

Kaymises:

The women. Horrible, horrible creatures that could be compared with Hippos. They are much more narcissistic than Kim Heechul is. They don’t really care if the world ends; all that matter to them is if their make-up was on perfectly. They aren’t even pretty to begin with, not even close to what the Crocells look like. They look like iguanas with plastic surgeries. Don’t need to look for pictures, because they look ridiculous.

They are sadistic, es of witches who clearly enjoyed the Crocells pain. Reading about them in general history might sear their tiny brains off. They’ve had the genes of past witches, with obviously made them witches of the new generation. Yes, they can cast spells and hocus pocus what not. Potions, fancy brooms made of gold, Quiditch, and all those fancy stuff.

They live in a place, something like LA, full with pale skinned Koreans. (I’m not racist, but sue me) Their country is richer than Sapphire, and they had the highest technology Steve Job’s minions could only dream of. They own Paris Hilton’s clothes, and house. Each and every one of them are spoiled brats, buying money for money. They didn’t really need love, all they needed was reproduction.

The Game.

Battle of the warriors, as they call it.

It was the game the Goddess had thought of to revenge herself on her brother’s foolish impact. It was a game she invented herself, and it was said to be played for a hundred-thousand years. Since the Crocells had played it for two hundred and forty-four years, only ninety-nine thousand seven hundred and fifty-six more years to go before their spell was released.

So, once a hundred years passed since the last time they’ve played the game, they would have Colhendo day. The day of Reaping. All Crocells between 1000-2000 years will have to attend to this day. Minerva will place part of her soul into a spiritual form and land at Sapphire, where she would be the one to choose her slaves, her entertainment. She would choose ten, the ones she thinks that can entertain them a little better than the last batch.

When the ten are chosen, they are sent to the capitol, where a really, really big feast is held for them. They are then trained for a week, training with the nine members, and then are finally put into the arena.

The Arena is a distant moon where the Kaymis controls, called Valcrum. They would spend a Hundred years planning, designing the interior of the planet. Each time it would be different. They’ve had Atlantis, Mordor, Hell itself, New York, Antarctica, the murky forests, to the Savannahs. Yes, when it comes to killing the Crocells, the witches’ minds can be very powerful.

They Battle can be held for a month, three at most. They are to kill each other off, and bring good laughs to the Kaymises. What they do will be screened, and broadcasted to both Sapphire and Ruby.  And when the final Warrior stands alive, He will be returned home, as the Victor of the battle. And just like all Victors, you get one wish granted, by Minerva herself.

Leap year: Held every 250 years in the game. Once the game is played for 250 times, they will have a leap year that year, which is when Minerva selects twenty Players, instead of ten. And there will be two victors, instead of one. This is a new rule the Kaymises decided to add at the eleventh hour, just for the fun of it.

Minerva: A witch, the Goddess and protector of the moon, sister to Mercury. Unlike the Kaymises, she’s not bad looking at all. Yes, she spoils her ‘children’, but that doesn’t mean she doesn’t have the right to power over them when things get too bad.

Mercury: A Warrior himself, the God of the Sun and Crocells. He loves his followers very much, and tries to help them in ways we can’t see. He’s the spitting Image of Minerva, without the fake s, fake tan, and everything girly.

The Main Characters in my story:

1. Lee Sungmin, 1,100 years old. Fun, bubbly, will kill you with his Aegyo AND martial arts. Best friends with Hongki.

2. Cho Kyuhyun, 1,200 years old. Snarky, has a dark side to him. But still, tries to act lovable when times called for it. Best friends with Changmin.

3. Kim Heechul, 1700. A vicious one. You don’t want him hunting you down.

4. Leetuek, 1,700. Despite his fragile appearance, he can fight.

5. Choi Siwon, 1500. Opposite of Leetuek, and is quite sensitive. Best friends with Minho.

6. Kim Kibum, 1,100. The quiet one, who likes to analyze rather than socialize.

7. Lee Eunhyuk, 1,200. A hyper active Monkey who can be quite serious at times, too. Best friends with Henry.

8. Lee Donghae, 1,200. A hyper active fish, who is rather lovable even though he’s quite naïve. Good friends with Shindong.

9. Kim Ryeowook, 1,100. The sweet, caring one who can own you in a couple of minutes with his cooking skills.

10. Yesung, 1,400. The odd ball, though strong and thoughtful.

And there's my other characters, which I love equally:

1) Lee Hongki, 1,100. 

2) Henry Lau, 1,000.

3) Yang Yoseob, 1,100.

4) Lee Kikwang, 1,200.

5) Hyunseung, 1,400.

6) Junhyung, 1,400.

7) Joon, 5,000.

8) Mir, 4,500.

9) Jaejin, 1,200.

And many more to go. ( See what I meant when I said Crocells are reaaaally good looking? )

So… I know my mind is weird! But once you read this, I’m sure you’re going to help me go through this, right?

Feel free to ask anything! -Lulu