Chapter 4: Not even lying, I'm sobbing right now. I just, umm, wow, it hurts to read...(?)
You're doing an amazing job portraying their sufferment, like, I'm feeling it myself.
Wish I had more to say but I'm still too stunned to form cohesive comments.
Just know that this chapter left a void in my chest. For better or worse I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.