The Finish Line [Oneshot]

Description

Faith is faith and love is love, no matter how much Jaejoong tries to run. Thanks to a chance meeting in the rain and a little girl who still has her mother's faith, he realizes that he never lost anything at all. Yunho is waiting.

Foreword

I have no idea where this came from, but...ughh....I have so many feelings about TVXQ. XD I could rant and sob forever about them...so instead, I'll just say nothing and leave you to read the story.

This is like...how I hope things will turn out.

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QueenOfRoses #1 Oct 15, 2012 21:57:59

Chapter 1: I feel like crying. This is so beautiful. I wish TVXQ was still 5 I- *starts crying* I love this... I wish will be one again.... *sob*

nayeli21 #2 Jul 19, 2012 00:14:05

TT.TT I'm crying right now!! god just assfsfdgk >_< so beautiful but yet so heartbreaking because they are not together u.u

entropy #3 Mar 15, 2012 08:27:21

You, are an amazing writer. This made me nearly cry :')
I'm sitting in Lang right now, just, in the corner, reading this and trying not to watch a DBSK video and start crying over how much I want them to reunite. I, sniff, WAHHHH. I CANT FORM COHERENT WORDS. WHAT ARE THEY. I DONT KNOW.

This is an amazing oneshot. It was moving, and the mood was so serene and lovely and sad and hopeful and everything.... And I love love love love love how interestingly you structure the plot line. Like, the girl having such an impact. Well, actually the fanssss having such an impact on giving hope to Jae. I WISH IT WOULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE. CAN YOU SEND THIS FIC TO JAEJOONG?! PWEASE???!

And by the way, congrats for writing a serious, non-cracky fics. You are just ing amazing. You write, ughhh.... i can't do justice. I LOVE EVERY WORD YOU WRITE. EVERY SINGLE LETTER. Everything is just SO PERFECT. I wub this so much. And you too.

luvkpopcoupleshehe #4 Mar 3, 2012 13:29:05

I just wanna hug u soo much and cry!! ... Dis fic has so much faith and hope it just made me a stronger cassie.. Da days when i am low dis fic will giv me faith .. Dis was so beautiful.. Ur an amazing cassie.. DB5K!!.. I will ALWAYS KEEP THE FAITH!!!... *kisses and hugs* to u.. mwahhhh!!..

ibelieveindb5k #5 Mar 2, 2012 23:51:13

This helped my faith grow a whole lot stronger. :') Thankyou for the wonderful story, dear. Love will keep them together like it always had. :)

pineapplebuns #6 Mar 2, 2012 19:43:18

such a wise child~ i like her xD
cute story~ AKTF

filla_stellae #7 Mar 2, 2012 00:36:35

SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Next time tell me you have a new story out and I'll read it sooner. btw can you get on facebook either tomorrow or saturday so we can chat? I miss spazzing with you!

sammyx3 #8 Feb 28, 2012 05:25:36

T^T!! That was just. Idek.
Times when keepin the faith gets tired...
It's things like this that make me continue to keep the faith.
Thank you!! ^__^

Kudoka #9 Feb 28, 2012 03:14:56

loved it!! it's so touching... T.T
btw, i'm newbie here..