A Thousand Words

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I think this is my first and last for the year and I am so sorry for the mess. I needed somewhere to vent and I thought this was a good start. This has exactly a thousand words and is close to my heart. It has a lot of gaps so I hope your imagination can fill everything else in. 

I know this year has been tough on all of us and each has their own struggles but I'm really proud of you for getting through it. I wish you all a better year ahead. 

Happy New Year everyone! 

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cbennh_tjsthysys #1
I'M SO CURIOUS WHAT'S HAPPENING NEXTJXSKKD
ckaz99 #2
Chapter 1: I just found this. It's beautiful... My heart wrenches at it and every word has its perfectly poised place in a thousand words. The thoughts at the end, the recollections at the end, ahhh it is haunting but is what wraps up the beauty of this piece and sticks to mind. Thank you for writing it, I hope it's brought readers all some solace at the end of the year :')
Pandayum #3
EVERYONE SAY THANK YOU TO REDUX FOR SAVING 2020 BY BLESSING US WITH THIS SHORT BEAUTY ON THE VERY LAST DAY!!!!! REDUX YOU POETIC, MAJESTIC BASTARD I MISSED YOU SO MUCH-
WavingPanda #4
Chapter 1: It’s simply beautiful to have you back, pandaredux, and to read the flow of your words once again.

There were two sentences that especially stood out to me:

"The sun was setting in our usual patch of grass but it felt like the sun was setting on my heart instead."

"...some reminder of the love-filled version of myself that has exhausted its youth."

Truly haunting. Any sentence around those two felt like supportive sentences, since they carried the main idea wonderfully.

Oh! And since you gave me free will upon the ending, I decide that it’s hopeful. Yes. Cannot change my mind. Let’s take that fraction of second and capture them both there.
Panda0619 #5
Chapter 1: There's just too many gaps.. and the way that my imagination is filling these gaps up, make this a sad story.. =(

But thanks for sharing the story, hope it gave you some solace while crafting it..
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