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MiTzuland
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When I met you I thought you were too sweet, nice and pretty girl. I felt that we had many things in common. That made me believe you were wonderful.

 

 

I remember how Momo made us talk, she always wanted to help me find a person for me and when she met you. She felt you were the right one. Maybe he was right.

 

 

You started to send me messages, we went out to eat, we started to know each other better and I don't know when you started to enter my heart. When you asked me to be your girlfriend. I told you yes , after all, you were what I needed most in my world.

 


Everything went well, my friends were happy for us and after a while we moved together. Everything was perfect... Very perfect I would say. Until I began to feel anguished, insecure and when you told me you were busy. When you began to forget the things that were important to me, when your lips felt so indifferent to me, I realized that everything was wrong.


You were deceiving me. The first time I noticed it, was when you received a call, you spoke to him if he were your whole world and while you speak to him like that.

 

 

 

 

My world was falling.

 

 

That day we discussed, everything ended with me crying and you asking for forgiveness. I thought you we

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PastelAlleys #1
Chapter 1: <3
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #2
Chapter 2: Aw I thought this collection was going to be for fluff only, it was still an interesting read tho
ChouTzu14 #3
Chapter 2: waaaaah you broke my heart author :( is there a sequence for this??
sliveredge #4
Chapter 2: Here's another review, feel free to delete it if you're offended by it. So, looking at the tags with fluff + mitzu, i thought it would be something wholesome but this chapter is really not that, you might want to add angst to your tags. Unlike your 1st chapter which has some fluff, this one has almost none. The 1st chapter is more enjoyable and somewhat consistent with the tags (even though they didn't know each other). This one has less amount of mistakes (there are still some here and there) and easier to read compared to the 1st chapter. Anyway, good luck for the upcoming chapter and your future endeavor.
ohmymyoui
1436 streak #5
Chapter 1: That was cute I love these "fight and then pretend like they're strangers and talk it out" scenarios