Broken

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Description

Broken - v. past participle of break; a. [1] reduced to fragments, fragmented. [2] disunited or divided; when a person is so lost and depressed they can no longer function in society properly.                

Foreword

He sighed, and then he stood up. He was pacing in the living room thinking deeply. He went near the door and motioned for me to come and follow him. He held my hands and looked at me in the eye. I looked up at him. I read his expression; it was full of pain, worry, and sadness. It seems that there is something bothering him so much.

“Are you okay? Are you sick?” I asked, full of concern. He shook his head and looked down.

A thought flashed into my mind. Uh-oh, this is it. The day I never wanted to come.


I do not own the characters, only the plot and the story. I would also like to thank paigehk and ppz_uk of A+Changjo Poster Request Shop for the poster! :)

Please help me be a better author, your feedback (comments, constructive criticisms, etc.) are greatly appreciated! 

Comments

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Shiela76 #1
Chapter 1: A sequel pls!!!
x0xlilpunkx0x #2
Chapter 1: it was so short yet heartbreaking D:
great oneshot, thanks for sharing
charmillesenica #3
A sequel please? :(
iLoveNyongdal
#4
DO A SEQEUL ! PRETTY PLEASE ~~!
sarrizky
#5
SEQUEL! this story definitely need one!!! x'(
lolyguysjk #6
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!!! :DDDD<br />
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It's heart-breaking even though it's short. D:<br />
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spongey
#7
where is he going? hehe! yeah, a sequel would be great!
anniekhun #8
:OOOO great oneshot :DD same as the bottom comment, I WANT A SEQUEL.<br />
chocolate_love
#9
great oneshot~!♥♥<br />
hope there will be a sequel^^<br />
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callmesiv
#10
whaaaatttt??? end already and they just said good bye..oh no....is there a sequel for this??please wall me..