Suffocate

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` I love you so much, I'm suffocated.

I love you so much, I feel like dying.

Now I know, that the definition of fate was you.

Your name is engraved in my heart

I can't breathe, I can't stop, I can't say the words, "I love you." 

He knew what lied before him was wrong. Staring at her face, full of love and joy for his brother, he couldn't bare but just stare. He knew he should stop, and shake the memories of him and her, and what might have sparked before his brother came, but he had to let it go. He gave her to his brother, that is, before he knew he fell for her. But now, he just stands, across the distance, not knowing what to do. 

`

"My heart only breathes for you." 

 

[Quotes from Lee Hyun - Suffocate. From the ost of 'Invincible Lee Pyung Gang.']

Foreword

I know I said my other fanfic would be my last, but I listened to this song, and an idea popped in my head. 

Hopefully, it'll be good. It's going to be a oneshot, so it won't be LONG, like my other one. 

Hope you enjoy & please give me feedback :) 

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ZakhirahMeyh #1
Chapter 1: ... /le cry/ yongguk totally didnt deserves this sadness. T^T
ScarletMist #2
Chapter 1: This didn't at all~! In fact,,, its AMAZING!!! And I have an addiction towards Angst... Oh God.. Seriously I love it...
dreamingunderstars #3
Chapter 1: This didnt at all! Amazing! )':
whiteshirt #4
kyahh!!
i really love angst story!
Moonmika #5
Damn this is good..

Not even close to ..
Seriously u did a great job for one-shot..
Love this as much as i love ur other story..
nokazkuran12 #6
This was so... good. And sad... Please write more of this ^^
ljoes-angel #7
Poor Yongguk...:(
laviathan66 #8
i agree with Yeoniie! I wanted to hug him when he dropped to the floor T.T
hyeamazing #9
ㅠoㅠ POOR GUKKIE ;__;
Yeoniie #10
OMG this is so sad T__T
I feel disappointed and sad about Yongguk at the same time..
Yes it was his fault that he didn't realize sooner about his feelings for her, but her taken away by Himchan was really harsh for him..
and that she rejected him like that. Why gave him a kiss first?? She was making him full with hopes for few moments when they shared kiss and then she just backed away after saying she loved him so much by saying she loves Himchan and cannot betray her..
Really, it's so sad TT__TT I feel like hugging Yongguk when he dropped to the floor and screamed in pain..

But it's really great! It match the lyrics well, and I love your writing-style!
Please write some moreeeeeee <3
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