5B. On the darker side of things...

Til Death Do Us Part
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

"Say what now?" Chaewon asked in a voice so loud everyone in the café could hear her.

Yena tried to hush Chaewon while nervously looking around the cafe, nodding apologetically to the other customers. She said, "Chaewon, you promised you'd believe me!"

She tried to push Chaewon back down to her seat, but Chaewon pushed her arms away and stood back up. "You've got to be ing kidding me. Am I just supposed to believe that? What if it was just a dream? What if it was just a mere coincidence? Did she just throw away what we had based on a dream?"

Chaewon grabbed her bags and stormed out of the café. She went in thinking that she would be open to any reason that Hitomi might have had. It would have been better if Yena had said that Hitomi hated her so bad for catching her with Minju, or if Hitomi didn't feel loved at all. She could understand that, and she knows she can change that so their relationship can improve in the future. 

But a repeating day of her dying? That's just creative writing at best. For all she knew, it might have been Yena's means of messing with her. Hitomi wouldn't even think about such a thing, she was just too logical to make things up like that.

She hailed a cab and hopped in with one thought in mind: I need to hear this from Hiichan herself.

------

She got out of the cab in front of Hitomi's apartment and knocked on the door so loud that the neighbors would think someone was knocking on their doors.

The door opened and showed an annoyed Yuri who looked like she just woke up.

Yuri groggily said, "Chaewon-unnie, what the ? There's a doorbell---" 

"Is Hiichan here? I have to see her, " interjected Chaewon, not caring one bit about the girl who opened the door.

"No, she's not. Now, go home."

Yuri tried to force the door shut in front of Chaewon, but the visitor did not give up that easily. She overcame Yuri's almost nonexistent strength to push the door wide open and entered inside the unit. She looked at Hitomi's door and saw light coming in the small space below Hitomi's door.

"Hiichan!", shouted Chaewon as she ran to Hitomi's door. The light coming out from the room suddenly disappeared, which confirmed that someone was indeed inside the room.

"Chaewon, please. Don't do this to Hiichan! It's for your own good," said Yuri who was fully awake now. Yuri wondered what is it with this couple that they managed to rudely wake her up, and on her birthday too.

However, it did not stop Chaewon. She was ruthlessly attacking Hitomi's door with loud knocks and an occasional violent twisting of the doorknob, but it wouldn't budge. "Let me in! I need to talk to you."

After a couple of minutes, she took a few steps back and said, "Hiichan, I know you're in there. If you don't come out of there on the count of three, I'm going to break down this door and you won't be able to get your security deposit back."

"One." No reaction.

"Two."

"Thr--" Chaewon was about to go on a kicking stance when the doorknob turned and the door opened. Hitomi peeked out of the door, her eyes puffy and red, and her hair in a big mess. It was obvious that the Japanese girl had been crying.

"Chaewon-unnie, please don't do this. We've already broken up. I've given you your chance to be with Minju, so please don't make it harder than it should be," Hitomi managed to say in between sobs, but Chaewon did not bother to listen to her. The older girl grabbed Hitomi and put her arms around her neck and kissed her deeply. Hitomi couldn't help but respond to the kiss. She also wanted her girlfriend's kiss, her touch, her breath on her neck, and everything else. 

When Chaewon broke off the kiss, she smirked and said, "Yena told me a weird story about a day repeating for you and me dying. What a joke, huh? Hiichan, I know you can never resist me, because I can't resist you either." 

Hitomi was frozen in her place, unable to move a muscle. This scene looked familiar

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Mizone
This is not yet the end! I'm waiting for the poll in Twitter that will decide what the ending would be for this story. If the ending is shorter than I expected, I'll just merge the final chapters.

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
LonelyBakahead
#1
Chapter 6: I'm rereading this again lol. I'd say this is my favorite among your works considering I've read this several times already.

My sadistic self still prefer the original angsty ending though both endings are great. I still couldnt get over how selfish (yet realistic) Chaewon is being. But is it really selfishness? I dunno, but I think it is:D

Either way, it's still an enjoyable read!
genes_hong #2
Chapter 6: yoooo so its now chaewon who got her day keep repeating.. sad
this story is so good

btw may I know what cause the day keep on repeating on hitomi in the first place?
LineB2N #3
Chapter 6: I really enjoyed the story!!! I was curious if you watched the Kagerou Daze mv because it really resembles what happens in the mv
Chubear17 #4
Chapter 6: Hello!!! I actually like your original ending. (To be honest this was exactly how i thought it would end)

I might be cruel for saying this but Idk there's just something romantic/attractive about a storyline where people go back to square one and try to change outcomes and i thought this route would be the most romantic of them all -knowing chaewon would do her best for hitomi too.

But either ending is a good one :)

Great job authornim! This will be archived in my favorite fics ever
Hiinako75106
#5
Chapter 6: Hmmmm It reminds me of the movie "The Butterfly Effect"
Electromaster
#6
Chapter 6: Omg, thanks for the mention, author-nim! I’ve been keeping track of this au on twitter and both endings are just good! Thank you for presenting us this masterpiece! :D
LonelyBakahead
#7
Chapter 6: Nevermind I take back what i said -- this is the PERFECT ONE

Last chapter is perfect but THIS is ALSO PERFECT

I love it equally <3
Yerimie
#8
Chapter 6: this ending is really cool!! especially since chaewon is now also aware of what's happening <33 not sure if you'll continue this or if this is already the end, but i enjoyed it nonetheless! hope to see more stories from you soon <3
genes_hong #9
Chapter 5: omg I really like this story this ending when they kissed made me cry ?
cooloveZ #10
Chapter 5: Best ending already. I'm glad that you wrote this ending for the story. Looking forward to see more Ssambbang fic in the future.