Doo's mind is responding to himself?!

Please Wake Up

Gikwang's P.O.V.

me and seungie and seobbie and woonie turn at our back just to find

junnie and doo hyung running to me

"Yah! gikwang why are you with them?!"junnie said

"ummmm"i just mumbled aishh such a bad timing hyungs! i thought

"i and seungie hyung will just hang out" i hold seungie's hand

"umm bye hyungs!" i pulled seungie faster out if my hyung

"kwangie why are we running?" seungie asked me

"i'll explain later seungie but we gotta run first"i said

End of P.O.V.

while kwangie and seungie are running

back at the park with doo,seobbie,wonie and junnie

"yah! kwangie!" i shouted and run towards their way

"jun!"shouted doo , being a gentleman doo look at seobbie then at woonie and smiled shyly

"umm yo-you w-wan-t"doo is stutering

"woonie let's go and find seungie!" seobbie and woonie run and try to find their hyung

"aishhh! doo wat are you stutering about?"doo asked himself

"it's because of yoseob that you are stutering"doo minds respond

"aishh! shut up!" doo run and try to find his friends

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AttaCoff_239 #1
woaah you really update that fast XD *happy*
AttaCoff_239 #2
aaaw wanna know what happen with KIseung and Dooseob and ofcourse Junseung later XD
palli palli update soon Xp kekke
CutiPieiii
#3
heheheh funny the chapter 7 its end in a funny way
vicsyah
#4
please update soon xDD
b2utyfulme
#5
ah kiseung is so sweet XD
junnieSeung #6
poor seungie !
junnie such a liar! ahahaha! XD
angelb2st_suju
#7
mianhae that's just the prologue of the story . . . .. . . don't worry i will continue my story . . when they first met . ... mianhae
soo2k_ #8
I need more
mhuzei #9
Your story plot is good however, you did not elaborate some things, though i know this is just a oneshot you still have to elaborate some things so that it won't just appear a plain story with an intro and ending. for example, why does junhyung break-up with hyunseung? is there any reason behind it? Then another thing is that the characters lack of feelings.. better to have diffrent point of views so that us readers will know and feel more about them.. and lastly, how about hara? what will hara do if he will come back to hyunnie.. but, this story written above is good itself. :) those things that i said is just recommendations, hope it will help :))