Please Wake Up

Description

junhyung is waiting for hyunseung to wake up

Foreword

Junhyung's P.O.V.

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i still remember you cute and adoring smile when we went to the zoo and when you saw the animals~~~


flashbacks~~~


"woah!  junnie ! look at the penguins ! it's so cute !

"you can't have a penguin seungie"

*pouts*

"keke your so cute when you pout *pinch the cheeks of seungie* it makes me want to kiss you"

"hmnp! you can't do that junnie!"

"what if i kiss you now seungie"

"come on junnie! i dare you you can't kiss me right infront of these many people!"

*kiss seungie*

"ya! why did you kiss me!"

"cause you try to dare the cool Yong Junhyung! keke! "

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AttaCoff_239 #1
woaah you really update that fast XD *happy*
AttaCoff_239 #2
aaaw wanna know what happen with KIseung and Dooseob and ofcourse Junseung later XD
palli palli update soon Xp kekke
CutiPieiii
#3
heheheh funny the chapter 7 its end in a funny way
vicsyah
#4
please update soon xDD
b2utyfulme
#5
ah kiseung is so sweet XD
junnieSeung #6
poor seungie !
junnie such a liar! ahahaha! XD
angelb2st_suju
#7
mianhae that's just the prologue of the story . . . .. . . don't worry i will continue my story . . when they first met . ... mianhae
soo2k_ #8
I need more
mhuzei #9
Your story plot is good however, you did not elaborate some things, though i know this is just a oneshot you still have to elaborate some things so that it won't just appear a plain story with an intro and ending. for example, why does junhyung break-up with hyunseung? is there any reason behind it? Then another thing is that the characters lack of feelings.. better to have diffrent point of views so that us readers will know and feel more about them.. and lastly, how about hara? what will hara do if he will come back to hyunnie.. but, this story written above is good itself. :) those things that i said is just recommendations, hope it will help :))