hehehehehe...being hurt...yumm >.<

This is really cute! Hyukkies adorable!:)

i agree with PSYMotive :D
i liked the story, but it woudl've been better if there were no grammatical mistajes ^^
fighting ~~

It was funny, lol, like usual, Heechul is the mastermind behind all the erse plans. Poor Hyukjae...

But as an advice- I recommend you to find a beta, you have so many grammatical mistakes, that your writing is sometimes hard to follow.I had to re-read some parts to understand what you wanted to say.
Good luck!